Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I absolutely love the journey this awesome book is taking me on. Awesome presentation, as always. Claudiu seems to be taking good care of her, keeping her cozy as she dreams.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

He's trying to do his best, given the rather "unique" circumstances, Sasha.
I'm glad you're enjoying the journey.
I hope you'll enjoy the destination it takes you to just as much.
Thanks so much again for reading all of these chapters.
You're a jewel, Sasha!

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Dean Kuch, This concept is so cute. I love it. I'll have to backtrack and try to catch up. I enjoyed reading your haiku, especially:

tucked away in tufted bed

(Good imagery and alliteration - nice)

Good luck with your book. This poem made me smile. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016

Thanks for reading, LateBloomer.
I'm happy to know you enjoyed this.
Take care,
~Dean

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You two have a very wonderful book of poems started. I hadn't read any installments for awhile. I am glad you are back at it.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016

Thanks for reading and following along with our story, Barbara. We both sincerely appreciate it.
~Dean

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

Each one of your pieces is so unique and creative.
I imagine this long hallway and the subject unable
to make the journey. This is going to be a wondeful
book! -Bill

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016

We think so, Bill, and I thank you for saying the same.
Much obliged for the read & review, my friend.
~Dean

Comment from pharp

Excellent

Dean
This is another great Haiku you have penned my friend. I am enjoying the story line, it appears that Mirela will be coming out with a lot of force since her dreams are revealing to her much about her past huh? I had to go back to your previous Haiku to make sure I had not missed one and I haven't. Thanks for sharing. Blessings....................Portia

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016

Thank you for checking this chapter out, Portia. I really appreciate the fact that you're following along with the story.
I hope you're enjoying it as well.
Thanks so much again.
Blessings,
~Dean :}

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Now that she has remembered her powers the games will begin. Good haiku. Like the feeling of being wrapped both by blankets and nightmares. Trapped both physically and mentally. Great job. Gretchen

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016

Thanks for reading and reviewing this chapter in our hora haiku book, Gretchen.
I appreciate you following along with the story.
~Dean

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Poor Mirela! Good thing she has Claudiu to take care of her! *smile* I could understand this haiku - I've had trouble following some of them. Sorry! Sounds like she also has a roaring fire going to warm her! *smile*

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

You're right, Robyn, she does have a fire going to keep her warm.
Castles are kind'a cold and drafty, ya know?
Claudiu is a very gentlemanly sort of chap.
Thanks very much for reading and following along.
~Dean :}

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Dean,

Well this one goes with the one that I read that she just wrote. Both of you are doing very well in writing these poems. I'm jus wondering how long the story will be.

Kat

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thank you very much for reading and faithfully following along with this story in haiku form, Kat.
Gypsy & I deeply appreciate it.
God bless, and have a wonderful weekend.
~Dean

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Now you're getting down to the nitty gritty...is only ye olde mundane human being capable of Senryu? Are zombies, vampires and weremutts
Haiku fodder? Just padding my review. Excellent page in the hora(hour in Spanish)Haiku...

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thanks for continuing to follow along, Red.
Fodder or no fodder, I appreciate your time.
~Dean

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku-looking poem, Too Weak To Walk, certainly captures the gist of the storyline and what Mirela is experiencing within the castle interior. Nice.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thanks a bunch for continuing to follow along with this haiku/Gothic horror story, Bill.
I haven't the slightest idea where Gypsy Blue Rose is gonna take it from here.
Much obliged, buddy.
Have a great weekend.
~Dean