Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was delightful to read. You addressed the stepping stones in life and how they are walked as well as present the ultimate goal to be in our stride. Good job, thank you.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.

reply by aryr on 16-Sep-2016

You are so very welcome.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match.
So many people are wearing masks pretending they are someone else.
What a blessing when that day come when the are truly themselves,
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.

reply by misscookie on 16-Sep-2016

You're very welcome have a nice week end.
Cookie

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Patricia
I like how you wrote this poem with the photo of the masks

I used to dwell in-Congnito
that required me to be masked
lying about who I was when asked.

So I now live in-Deed
here I am free to be who I am
and my life is not a sham.

I can resonate with these two verses. Well done, Mary

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Loren (7)

Excellent

Hi Pat. A little behind on my reading as I've been on jury duty for the past 10 days. I don't think you've anything to worry about where your headed when your earthly duties are done. I think a remarkable thing the Bible tells us is the way God sees us - clothed in the Righteousness of Christ Himself. A very comforting thought - not of ourselves or about ourselves, but of Christ's covering upon us by His sacrifice. Loren

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

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Comment from GoodHearted Woman

Excellent

You are on a roll, Miss Pat! Imagine all the nice places you will have to choose from.
Very cute idea, but you seem to be full of them. I think the Lord has truly blessed
you with creative ideas,all the more to praise his Name.

I am lucky to have one come to my inbox nearly everyday without fail.
Another lovely one.
Good
Hearted
Woman

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Very original idea for a poem, Patricia. I like the incognito, indeed, incredible phrases. My favourite sentence is:
so everyone will say whoa
just look at that old gal go.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

One day I want to live in-Credible
so everyone will say whoa
just look at that old gal go.

ME, TOO! *smile*

This was a fun write, indeed! I agreed with every stanza. Especially the last one! Thanks!

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Your growth and strength is well know among your friends.
This is an example of your faith and the love to share with us all.
Very nicely done

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.