Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is clever and fun, Patricia. I enjoyed reading it. Well presented.
I did notice a typo in the very first line:
"I used to dwell in-Congnito (cognito)"
Marilyn

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016

Thanks for your review. I corrected it thanks.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

yes I once used to live in congnito until I excepted God in my life also. Nicely done on this Pat, Thanks for the share and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Very clever the way you've used - in-Cognito - in-Deed-in-Credible works really well. But your verses still have a serious note about learning to be free to be yourself. Nicely done,
cheers

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review. I had a bit of fun writing this, but had to put a serious note to it as well.

Comment from MelB

Excellent

so everyone will say whoa
just look at that old gal go. - I enjoyed this fun side of you, Patricia!
I think we'll have even more fun up there, don't you?

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.
I do have a bit of a funny side.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I really enjoyed this poem you have penned. I, too, like the last stanza too. Very good wording and very good imagery. Great job. hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pat

= Life goes so much smoother when we finally let go of the mask.
= Pleasing others just never works.
= Powerful last stanza, too. Nicely penned. Love the masks.

<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings ... Jax
<> Published as ... Jacqueline M Franklin

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Patricia,

This is another nice little poem you've written.
Four verses with three lines each looks nice.
Also the rhyming is great with them too.

You're a great poet, my friend.

Kat

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This is a fun poem. I also want to end up in heaven and believe that I will. It would be nice to live again without the fears that seem to mount as we age.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Patricia, we'll done. Yes, there are those times we want.to hide who we are. We can be free from those sins and the shame in Christ. I didn't look it up but is incognito a typo...you have in congnito.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review. This was satire in-cognito.

Comment from Joan E.

Exceptional

I admired your tercets and rhyme scheme. Your wordplay with "in-Cognito," "in-Deed" and "in-Credible" is brilliant as is your artwork selection to reinforce the idea of "masked". Well done! -Joan

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016

Thanks for the nice review.