After the Rain
When all is well on earth...and in heaven.2 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
This was a cool post. I don't know this form too well, but this poem was unique and different and highly enjoyable. *smile* I liked the similarities from the first stanza to the second. Very well done!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016
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This was a cool post. I don't know this form too well, but this poem was unique and different and highly enjoyable. *smile* I liked the similarities from the first stanza to the second. Very well done!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016
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Thank you so much for the en encouraging review!
Comment from kiwisteveh
Your poem led me to go and google upside-down rainbows to double check that they actually exist. Other readers might appreciate some information in your notes about the relatively rare occurrence.
In any case, your double cinquain, presents a pretty picture of the smiling sky. Perhaps not entirely accurate since my research tells me these smiles are created by the sun's rays shining through ice crystals, not raindrops. Hoever, I do like the sense of peace and well-being felt after rain.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016
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Your poem led me to go and google upside-down rainbows to double check that they actually exist. Other readers might appreciate some information in your notes about the relatively rare occurrence.
In any case, your double cinquain, presents a pretty picture of the smiling sky. Perhaps not entirely accurate since my research tells me these smiles are created by the sun's rays shining through ice crystals, not raindrops. Hoever, I do like the sense of peace and well-being felt after rain.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 15-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016
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Thanks for the info.
