Hora haiku (Horror haiku)
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "horror haiku (burn Hades heathens)"A co-authored book of dark haiku poetry
33 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
I was wondering when she would get her memory back. Excellent poem that describes her anger superbly. superb presentation and divine artwork you have chosen to go with these marvelous haikus. I enjoyed this one immensely.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
I was wondering when she would get her memory back. Excellent poem that describes her anger superbly. superb presentation and divine artwork you have chosen to go with these marvelous haikus. I enjoyed this one immensely.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
Comment from johnwilson
Truly excellent work... the best haiku I have read in a long time accompanied by such a wonderful piece of artwork. You two are on quite the project and it's amazing so far!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016
Truly excellent work... the best haiku I have read in a long time accompanied by such a wonderful piece of artwork. You two are on quite the project and it's amazing so far!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words. You are very generous with your review.
Gypsy
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words. You are very generous with your review.
Gypsy
Comment from Pantygynt
The haiku horrorfest continues its bewitching dark tale of death and destruction. One day, probablwhen it is all done and one of you has written the dread words "The End" I am going to start at the beginning and read the whole thing through, but even as standalones I am enjoying these original Rumanian takes on the old Japanese form.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016
The haiku horrorfest continues its bewitching dark tale of death and destruction. One day, probablwhen it is all done and one of you has written the dread words "The End" I am going to start at the beginning and read the whole thing through, but even as standalones I am enjoying these original Rumanian takes on the old Japanese form.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016
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Thank you very much, Sir Gynt for the review and kind words. You are very generous with your review.
Gypsy
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Thank you very much, Sir Gynt for the review and kind words. You are very generous with your review.
Gypsy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Another good Haiku for the project.
-Very effective imagery and alliteration
that adds to the mood and meaning.
-A dramatic satori that leaves no doubt about the outcome.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Another good Haiku for the project.
-Very effective imagery and alliteration
that adds to the mood and meaning.
-A dramatic satori that leaves no doubt about the outcome.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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thank you very much, my friend :)
gypsy
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You are very welcome.
Comment from rspoet
This is another fine addition to the Hora haiku book
with exact syllables at 5-7-5
Nice use of alliteration throughout
Interesting use of the group's name as the satori line
Consistently dark with excellent presentation
Well done
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
This is another fine addition to the Hora haiku book
with exact syllables at 5-7-5
Nice use of alliteration throughout
Interesting use of the group's name as the satori line
Consistently dark with excellent presentation
Well done
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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thank you very much, my friend :)
gypsy
Comment from sandy montgomery
I love the line "in sulfurous fiery sea". What a fantastic image that provokes. I don't know the sory here but this verse makes me want to. I found this crafted perfectly and have no criticism to offer. Wonderful job.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
I love the line "in sulfurous fiery sea". What a fantastic image that provokes. I don't know the sory here but this verse makes me want to. I found this crafted perfectly and have no criticism to offer. Wonderful job.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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thank you very much, my friend :) i love the pretty six stars, thank you.
gypsy
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy Rose,
This is another nice poem to go with yours and Deans poetry. You and he are really great at writing poetry together and they are always a joy to read.
Kat
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
Hi Gypsy Rose,
This is another nice poem to go with yours and Deans poetry. You and he are really great at writing poetry together and they are always a joy to read.
Kat
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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thank you very much, my friend :)
gypsy
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You're very welcome. Kat
Comment from oliver818
Great beginning haiku. I read your Plan to write a horror haiku story, seems like a really great idea so good luck with that! Thanks
For posting
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
Great beginning haiku. I read your Plan to write a horror haiku story, seems like a really great idea so good luck with that! Thanks
For posting
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Hello, Oliver. This is haiku number fifteen in the story. If you read the author notes you will find a book summary and a link for the other chapters. Thank you for reading. :)
gypsy
Comment from Unspoken94
Exceptional. You put a lot of work into developing
this piece for us to enjoy. Very well done. You and
Dean are really do a great job. -Bill
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
Exceptional. You put a lot of work into developing
this piece for us to enjoy. Very well done. You and
Dean are really do a great job. -Bill
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Thank you, Bill, you are very kind and I appreciate that you took the time to review my poem. Peace be with you.
gypsy
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Thoroughly enjoying the art which I think is absolutely the best you have chosen to add spectactlar to the word horror.
I am a little lost on this one, I am afraid to say. The heathens I assume are ones that do not like her?
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
Thoroughly enjoying the art which I think is absolutely the best you have chosen to add spectactlar to the word horror.
I am a little lost on this one, I am afraid to say. The heathens I assume are ones that do not like her?
Comment Written 15-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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yes :) those are the heathens. Thank you, Barb, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my haiku. peace be with you.
gypsy