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Poems by Michael

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Comment from sandy montgomery
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This poem feels timeless. It is both modern yet elicits a memory of something classic and dogearred like the book of poems I've had since girlhood. I love the artwork you chose. I thought it complemented your work nicely.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    Hi Sandy...-smile-
    wow...so special....thank you for the comparison. love to you...michael
Comment from TPAC
Exceptional
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Straight to the heart statements, writer skills blooming their work with their pause and compelling views. I found interesting in their thoughts projected.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    Hey thanks so much....-smile-
    happy you enjoyed this with me. love michael
Comment from Bollie
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This is a really beautiful and romantic poem in its own right. Your words are very impactful and they captivate the readers attention. The photo is exquisite for this poem. Really nice job, keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    Hey man...-smile-
    well appreciate hearing that...pleased you enjoyed this with me. love Michael
Comment from tollyfaye
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The poetry was nice. Adding the music, artwork, simple black, white, blue and greys shimmering stars really makes it a complete work of art for the senses.

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 Comment Written 13-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
    Well thank you...-smile-
    I very happy you enjoyed this with me Tollyfaye. have a wonderful evening....love Michael
Comment from djsaxon
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I am so enamoured with your pen and your mindset. You know that already. Always always always impeccable in taste and presentation.

aware of every quarter moons promise (moon's)

DJ xx

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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
    ha...ah I was motivated. Hey DJ...-smile-
    thanks man...I comma'd up. Glad you liked it Bro....love michael