To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "May I"Poems by Michael
15 total reviews
Comment from closetpoetjester
Stunning write M, you have such a unique take on things and come up with some absolute gold at times.
Loved the "once a wish twinkles" and I'd have to agree. It's like opening a can of worms, but like...um...glittery ones haha
Hard to lose hope for sure...so much so, you've reiterated that again at the end. Your poetry always engages the reader, at times in a mystical way, or not. Whatever the case, I always find myself reading it twice so you're DOUBLE the work, mate LOL
And hey...heaven is ALWAYS where you are! Great write.
Sass
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016
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Stunning write M, you have such a unique take on things and come up with some absolute gold at times.
Loved the "once a wish twinkles" and I'd have to agree. It's like opening a can of worms, but like...um...glittery ones haha
Hard to lose hope for sure...so much so, you've reiterated that again at the end. Your poetry always engages the reader, at times in a mystical way, or not. Whatever the case, I always find myself reading it twice so you're DOUBLE the work, mate LOL
And hey...heaven is ALWAYS where you are! Great write.
Sass
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016
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you know I thought so too...so I put on front page...you know -handtwirl-... milk her for all she's got...it took no money and sexy to finally get recognized...tell me, what do you think that means Sas...be honest now...get naked if you have to I dont care...its cool. ahhaha....hello Daaarling....-smile-....thank you for not leaving me out in the rain...like all those others who just read me and leave....-sniff- ...hold me. love Michael
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LOL
I've stripped naked and am celebrating in the rain
Funny what 2c will do haha
I'm SO fuckin cheap LOL
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I guess...if priceless can be replaced...-smile-
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LOL
Actually, I like "priceless" better haha
Comment from Irish Rain
'Once a wish twinkles'....how beautiful is that line???? And I NEED that picture!!! I love it. Love this whole poem, 'Heaven is wherever we are'....it will be a while before I get that out of my head, 'Once a wish twinkles....' Blessings....
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
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'Once a wish twinkles'....how beautiful is that line???? And I NEED that picture!!! I love it. Love this whole poem, 'Heaven is wherever we are'....it will be a while before I get that out of my head, 'Once a wish twinkles....' Blessings....
Comment Written 15-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
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ha...-smile-...why thank you.
what a great review....I'm gonna push that button I hardly ever do...hang on to something....love Michael
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I am SO flattered!!! Thank you!!! Love your poem!!!!
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, sounds like true love at it's best...very rarely to find....but when you do...ecstasy...never ending making of love...home sweet home...eternally...never say never...beautifully written...and your picture is stunning...love the video...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
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HI Michael, sounds like true love at it's best...very rarely to find....but when you do...ecstasy...never ending making of love...home sweet home...eternally...never say never...beautifully written...and your picture is stunning...love the video...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
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Hello...-smile-
ah well....it was supposed to sound like a love like no other. true love at its best....hm....it would be heartbreaking to know so....but maybe. anyway...hope you're feeling better...love you too Michael
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hello...smile...ah well...yeah...thanks....hope your feeling good as well...love you too too...Linda xxoo
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-headshake-....I sign your autographs, take pictures with you, let you hang all over my every word ....what...? what more...? still not satisfied right...shall I open a vein, explain the innermost feeling of poetry...recite Shakespeare in English accentuated is that it...? would you like that now or after tea and crumpets...-headtilt-
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after tea and crumpets would be fine...and unless I missed something...I don't recall autographs and pictures...headshake....pop...pop...xxoo love
Comment from Joan E.
I liked your focus on "hope" and "ecstasy". Here's to the "twinkles" and "quarter moon's promise," which your superb, animated artwork selection reinforces! Big smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2016
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I liked your focus on "hope" and "ecstasy". Here's to the "twinkles" and "quarter moon's promise," which your superb, animated artwork selection reinforces! Big smiles- Joan
Comment Written 14-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2016
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yes well I certainly hope so...Hey j...-smile-
twinkle twinkle lil' star....how I wonder where you are...in this night so dark with sight...second guessing questions light.....grasping faith with all his might....believing in the brightness of life....erudite twinkles, twinkles like a lil' star.... there ya go...and a bag of chips too. -smile- love you michael
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Thanks for more twinkles--I need all of them I can get. Our new car was "stoned" by rocks from a truck, and the windshield is so high tech it had to be special ordered and won't be in until Friday! The evil omen brought new pains to my other side!! I know this too shall pass but it's a bummer at the moment. Take good care of yourself- Joan
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the sick badsters....I believe they carry sandwich bags of pebbles that they toss out the window for fun.....-headshake-....i'm so sorry J....they killed your windshield....sick badsters.........so the suped up z-28
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wow...where'd ya go....J...I'm almost done relax......as I was saying....I hope the Z gets a lil' rest anyway. okay...thats it ...okay...that wasn't so bad was it...aha
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Thanks for cursing the offender. Fingers crossed the new windshield actually arrives tomorrow. -J
Comment from P1
i love this, the picture the
music and of course the words
so full of hope so soft and romantic
i i guess we should always hope and
never give up... it might pay off
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
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i love this, the picture the
music and of course the words
so full of hope so soft and romantic
i i guess we should always hope and
never give up... it might pay off
Comment Written 14-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
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thank you Paige...-smile-
pleased you enjoyed this with me...love Michael
Comment from artemis53
I really loved this. Yes. You have the heart of a poet and I can only whish, not to mention pray treat it spills into all aspects of your life.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2016
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I really loved this. Yes. You have the heart of a poet and I can only whish, not to mention pray treat it spills into all aspects of your life.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2016
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yes I do....since a kid I guess I've seen things expressed different. Hi Dianne ...-smile-....thank you for this.. good to see you again. love Michael
Comment from Mastery
Hey, Michael. Excellent poetry here and I wish I still had some sixers left because this poetry is deserving, believe me.
You have a way with words for sure. Like here for instance:
:heaven is wherever we are
dancing entwined in slow lullaby's
dream become alive."
Wow! Good job. brilliant. Bob
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Hey, Michael. Excellent poetry here and I wish I still had some sixers left because this poetry is deserving, believe me.
You have a way with words for sure. Like here for instance:
:heaven is wherever we are
dancing entwined in slow lullaby's
dream become alive."
Wow! Good job. brilliant. Bob
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Hey Bob...-smile-
yea well I do too...its been a long time lets face it.....aha...ah thank you Sir. Well words are like women Bob, we think were working them ...then suddenly you find yourself apron strung to dirty dishes and addictions. Anyway God love em' both...what the hell would a poet do without um.....love Michael
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I am smiling. Geeez!
Comment from MissMerri
This is one tender and beautiful love song. I like love songs. I especially liked the strong imagery and the way the words chime in perfect harmony... like a bell choir, blending and singing delicately, creating lovely internal music.
I could not figure out how the title came to be... perhaps that is a secret for you and your beloved, but your poetry is always intriguing anyway, so I'm growing accustomed.
My favorite line: "mind says heartbeats/ life is breathe deep... ecstasy." (Does heartbeats need an apostrophe? Depends on your meaning there.) But this is a line that exemplifies the ringing of the vowel sounds in the words... very beautifully done. ~M
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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This is one tender and beautiful love song. I like love songs. I especially liked the strong imagery and the way the words chime in perfect harmony... like a bell choir, blending and singing delicately, creating lovely internal music.
I could not figure out how the title came to be... perhaps that is a secret for you and your beloved, but your poetry is always intriguing anyway, so I'm growing accustomed.
My favorite line: "mind says heartbeats/ life is breathe deep... ecstasy." (Does heartbeats need an apostrophe? Depends on your meaning there.) But this is a line that exemplifies the ringing of the vowel sounds in the words... very beautifully done. ~M
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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-smile-...me too.
all love songs come from internal music. has to be felt before its sung. Hey Meadow....you made me very happy today. enriched by a morning kiss. ah I dont know what happened with the L...I changed though....thank you...no ...I'm not a big fan of May 1st. its humiliating that I have to open for him...-headshake-...someday....someday Meadow....I'm gonna headline...-headnod-....I dont know if "heartbeats" needs an apostrophe...why in the world would you ask me...? -headtilt-...Meadow...you know me-....-smile-...love you Michael
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Michael,
This has a wistfulness I really liked. Like a slow dance unfolding to the music played...the loops into the ever after touch that specialness of one..
Your unique to you pen has changed since I was reviewing...I like the progression and growth in your writing. For that I give a six, for it is that inner growth in our writing that allows the poet to bloom. Nicely done my friend.
Hugs
Mo
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Hi Michael,
This has a wistfulness I really liked. Like a slow dance unfolding to the music played...the loops into the ever after touch that specialness of one..
Your unique to you pen has changed since I was reviewing...I like the progression and growth in your writing. For that I give a six, for it is that inner growth in our writing that allows the poet to bloom. Nicely done my friend.
Hugs
Mo
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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yes I am....-smile-...you give me the best buzz Mojo when you happen by. Hello Precious...-eyebatting-....yes yes wistful... fore-sure and unfolding. you better believe it...I'm in full bloom Mo...wow....you're like miracle grow...-smile-....
thank you most Special....for shining on me...-smile-...love you michael
Comment from royowen
I like and appreciate the sheer optimism and the impactive nature of your work, great descriptive text, that places hope and expectation above all else, such beautiful words woven in your narrative Michael, you've done well, my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
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I like and appreciate the sheer optimism and the impactive nature of your work, great descriptive text, that places hope and expectation above all else, such beautiful words woven in your narrative Michael, you've done well, my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
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Hey Roy...-smile-
ah well appreciate the acknowledgment by such a gifted pen. have a great Sunday...love Michael
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Most welcome Michael,
