Take a Tablet
Free verse /favourite object4 total reviews
Comment from Sis Cat
This is quite nice. I enjoyed your list poem which flowed quickly and chaotically reflecting "Life's cornucopia or info overload." You captured life today. Sometimes it feels that way and you want to shut things off.
Thank you for sharing. Congratulation for placing in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
This is quite nice. I enjoyed your list poem which flowed quickly and chaotically reflecting "Life's cornucopia or info overload." You captured life today. Sometimes it feels that way and you want to shut things off.
Thank you for sharing. Congratulation for placing in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from RYME4U
This is a very inclusive free verse list. It sounds like the news in general is your favorite prized possession.Very clever and innovative.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
This is a very inclusive free verse list. It sounds like the news in general is your favorite prized possession.Very clever and innovative.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from tollyfaye
I really like what you have done here. To know all that I would need a tablet, and to deal with it I would need a tablet like motrin. Good work. I made it what I wanted it to be. :) Asprin and off to bed for me. :)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
I really like what you have done here. To know all that I would need a tablet, and to deal with it I would need a tablet like motrin. Good work. I made it what I wanted it to be. :) Asprin and off to bed for me. :)
Comment Written 12-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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Glad you enjoyed it zanya
Comment from Steve Blair
Can you imagine living in times when most of those things didn't exist? But I'm thinking during those times, most humans were more worried about living from day to day. Which over stimulation is worse? Great poem. Not cluttered with thesaurus driven babble.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
Can you imagine living in times when most of those things didn't exist? But I'm thinking during those times, most humans were more worried about living from day to day. Which over stimulation is worse? Great poem. Not cluttered with thesaurus driven babble.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading and especially the final comment !zanya