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From out of the Grayness

Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "My most prized posession"
Reaching from the gray areas to understand life

10 total reviews 
Comment from tbacha58
Exceptional
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The touch of her hair is softer
Than my fingers in warm butter
Her tiny black eyes send more
Grip than a pipe wrench

Hi Vance, she is so so cute, and I am so happy to have read her story before going to bed. I really loved her, seeing her in between your hands, she is adorable, take could care of her. Much love Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
    Thanks so much Terry for your warm review and wonderful stars! Bitsy is my personal GUIDING ANGEL sent by GOD to look after me and keep me in a state of perpetual gratitude. I love her beyond words and she never leaves my touch..ever! Thanks so much! LOVE VANCE
Comment from Susan Chetcuti
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She is gorgeous. And she certainly looks like a prized possession.
I enjoyed reading about how much joy she brings to your lives.
I have a dog and understand how she makes you feel.
Well written.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
    Thank you for your kind words and so glad to meet another Dog (ANGEL) LOVER! VANCE
Comment from Preston McWhorter
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Hi, Your Grayness,
"My Most Prized Possession" is a beautiful tribute to a most remarkable sentient being who happens to be a pet in this life. She performs her duties of loving and comforting you with grace and dignity. And indeed is worthy of the praise you heap upon her. Good luck in the contest.
Your friend and colleague,
Preston

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
    Thank you so much Preston for this kind review/message! your words are always lovely gifts of precious jewels ! Vance
Comment from Treischel
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I thoroughly enjoyed you colorful depiction of a life with a Teacup Yorkie. In fact after smiling, my wife queried me. "What," see asked, as I must have sighed or something. So I read it to her. We both enjoyed your tale.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
    Thank you so very sincerely for your wonderful message! I'm truly honored as I have the greatest respect for you mind and your writing skills. I'm so glad you enjoyed sharing a bit about my endless delight (my guardian angel) in disguise of a puppy! My best wishes to you and your wife with thanks to you both for the "lift" Vance
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is outstanding. I enjoyed meeting Bitsy. She is indeed a precious thing. Your write shows pride and joyfulness and, yes, gratitude for having her and her having you. I'm smiling. Great job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    Thank you so much Marilyn! I always love hearing from you and I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this and sharing my powerful love for this truly God-Given Gift of endless love! Blessings! Vance
reply by BeasPeas on 18-Sep-2016
    Hi Vance. I LOVE animals of all kinds, especially my rescued dogs and kitty. They offer us so much. We're lucky to have them. Marilyn
Comment from Grasshopper2
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You obviously love your companion and your companion, said Teacup Yorkie, loveth you back--or perhaps first and you begrudgingly came around!? Hah. Nah. You love the dog that much I know. Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    Thank you so much Michael and somehow, your review was posted (and answered by me) twice....but hey! IT'S ALL GOOD!
    Thanks again! Vance
Comment from mvbrooks
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This poem emits a warmth and sense of satisfaction. Your writing is very creative and your analogies are truly original and memorable, including "my fingers in warm butter" giving a soft sensation, immediately followed by "more grip than a pipe wrench" (ouch). Very original poem and the sense of adoration is evident.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    Thank you so much mvbrooks for your very kind and encouraging review. Anything such a Bitsy that can generate constant and powerful GRATUTIDE is indeed a prized possession! Blessings and thanks .... from both of us! Vance and Bitsy
Comment from seaglass
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What a beautiful little dog. I have a mixed breed Yorkie and the characteristics you describe regarding Bitsy is the same with Gus. He talks with his eyes and spins circles whenever he's excited. They are amazing companions.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    Thank you seaglass for your kind message and review...and stars! I love this precious little (Guardian Angel in disguise) more than my words can ever express. GRATITUDE emits constantly and it is simply wonderful! Blessings: HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Ronni
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This is a most precious story about your ever devoted and loving pet, Bitsy;
and you likewise the ever proud, happy, devoted and loving owner and
human companion. Conveyed in your most warm and gracious style,
affection, introspection and enumerated delights and attending events.
As anyone knows, and can easily relate to, who has had, or has a loving
pet they interact with daily, in unequivocal love and abiding affections.
some human relationships, sadly, lack or are incapable of such undaunted
loyalty and unequivocal love. Yet our beloved pets, seem to come by it
naturally, and so eagerly share it and spoil us with their adorable traits
and blessings of consolation and reassurance they are in our lives.
So wonderful you have your 'angel' Bitsy, and so happy for you.
Thanks for sharing...best wishes always, Ronni

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    Dear Ronni, I knew that if anyone out there would understand the power of LOVE and GRATITUDE that I hoped to express in this work, it would INDEED BE YOU! Your works evoke the strongest and warmest feelings of love and gratitude and I'm deeply grateful for your wonderful and encouraging review! LOVE right back to you! Vance
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Bitsy seems to be a precious soul, who in defiance of her diminutive size, delivers a powerful punch to your heart. You two make a wonderful team.

Your story is well written and quite interesting for all of us who don't know her. Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    Thanks Rhonda, for your kind review and so glad you took the time to meet Bitsy! She is my first engagement with a living example of a true GARDIAN ANGEL! Blessings and thanks again1 Vance
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 18-Sep-2016
    Awww, so sweet!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2016
    Thanks so much Rhonda: she is indeed, MY GARDIAN ANGEL!. Vance