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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Sandra,
I enjoyed your poem for the challenge. Good job on the story in a poem. You put readers right there in the ship as it endures the storm. I like the personification of the tide & the storm. What a relief it was for these men to be saved by Him.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
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Sandra,
I enjoyed your poem for the challenge. Good job on the story in a poem. You put readers right there in the ship as it endures the storm. I like the personification of the tide & the storm. What a relief it was for these men to be saved by Him.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
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Thank you so much, Jan, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. I had forgotten how much I enjoyed writing poetry, writing my story has been taking all my time, but I must make some for these. Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
