The Screech
Awaken from a dream3 total reviews
Comment from Judy Couch
I like the idea of leaving the reader to finish the story, especially so in flash fiction. I've heard that about 50% of all home fires start in the dryer so the utility room is the logical place to look.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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I like the idea of leaving the reader to finish the story, especially so in flash fiction. I've heard that about 50% of all home fires start in the dryer so the utility room is the logical place to look.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
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Thanks for your read and your response.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is not a story. This is the start of a story. Stories require endings. Since you only have 100 words, that makes it a challenge. You cheated by omitting the end.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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This is not a story. This is the start of a story. Stories require endings. Since you only have 100 words, that makes it a challenge. You cheated by omitting the end.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Have you ever read "Lady or the Tiger?" Reader choose the ending. That is what I was trying to do. Thanks for the read.
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No, I haven't.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. You draw the reader into the story right from the start and hold one there until the end. It kind of leaves the reader hanging but what can you do with 100 words. Good work.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Excellent. You draw the reader into the story right from the start and hold one there until the end. It kind of leaves the reader hanging but what can you do with 100 words. Good work.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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I was trying to emulate "Lady or the Tiger. Reader chooses the ending.
