Spanish Girl, Interrupted.
Being bullied in the late seventies.17 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Dear M J, this must most traumatic, I guess we all react to stress or anger in different ways. My way was to go to an imaginary place, where everyone and everything was of a beautiful inclination, it's interesting that you don't remember the events after your meltdown. A great entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
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Dear M J, this must most traumatic, I guess we all react to stress or anger in different ways. My way was to go to an imaginary place, where everyone and everything was of a beautiful inclination, it's interesting that you don't remember the events after your meltdown. A great entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
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Thank for reading, Roy.
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Most welcome
Comment from Jackarrie
This is very interesting story about bullying at school, but the outcome was horrendous. He really brought you to the brink so much so you need to be hospitalized. I am glad you learned from your awful experience. Good luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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This is very interesting story about bullying at school, but the outcome was horrendous. He really brought you to the brink so much so you need to be hospitalized. I am glad you learned from your awful experience. Good luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading, Mary. I see you are up late too...
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I am watching the final in tennis
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Enjoy! I'm going to watch an American show myself.
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Enjoy it,
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, M J
= Excellent story for the prompt.
= Glad to see it was marked 'General Fiction' and not for real.
= Good luck in the contest.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Hi, M J
= Excellent story for the prompt.
= Glad to see it was marked 'General Fiction' and not for real.
= Good luck in the contest.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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I made a mistake here. It is real! I'll have to change it...
Thanks for reading.
Comment from heyjude
MJ, I know this was a difficult story to write. It is terrible about bullying.
I also had 3 guys in study hall at school who loved to tease me and see my
face turn red. It is very hard. I hope those guys changed when they got
older and I think at least one did. I think of teens who commit suicide
from being bullied. You did a great job of writing it. It's a good one for
this writing promp.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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MJ, I know this was a difficult story to write. It is terrible about bullying.
I also had 3 guys in study hall at school who loved to tease me and see my
face turn red. It is very hard. I hope those guys changed when they got
older and I think at least one did. I think of teens who commit suicide
from being bullied. You did a great job of writing it. It's a good one for
this writing promp.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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I'm glad you enjoyed it, Judith. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story. I hope that Jose Antonio had learned a lesson, and not bullying anyone anymore. I once turned around and slapped a girl right through her face while she was mocking me, she never came close to me again. Lol.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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A very well-written story. I hope that Jose Antonio had learned a lesson, and not bullying anyone anymore. I once turned around and slapped a girl right through her face while she was mocking me, she never came close to me again. Lol.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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I should have done that as well, Sandra. Thanks for reading.
Comment from aryr
This was an amazing account of the reality of bullying. Regardless of who is doing the bullying it is uncalled for and should never ever be condoned. It is difficult for the victim and even more so when those that should be understanding and helpful really do not do that. Great story, thanks.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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This was an amazing account of the reality of bullying. Regardless of who is doing the bullying it is uncalled for and should never ever be condoned. It is difficult for the victim and even more so when those that should be understanding and helpful really do not do that. Great story, thanks.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Thans for reading my little story.
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you are very welcome.
Comment from jlsavell
mj, I AM SO SORRY THIS HAPPENED TO YOU, Bullying is rampant and I too was the victim of bullies. I was shy and timid all through my childhood. Yes, what happens to us, does mold us. Good or bad.. You chose to not be victimized. thank you for sharing. Best wishes with contest, jlsavell
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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mj, I AM SO SORRY THIS HAPPENED TO YOU, Bullying is rampant and I too was the victim of bullies. I was shy and timid all through my childhood. Yes, what happens to us, does mold us. Good or bad.. You chose to not be victimized. thank you for sharing. Best wishes with contest, jlsavell
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Thanks so much for reading!
