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Comment from Ulla
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Hi Judy, it's not for me what your son is doing, but then again we can't decide what our children want to do with their life. I'm excited for you and your son that he's doing so well in his chosen sport. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2016
    I would have probably never watched fighting if my son had not become a professional. but now I am an avid fan. Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from frogbook
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My grandson began wrestling a few years ago and my family can't watch. It was hard at first but I find it so rewarding and a good lesson also as it is an individual win or lose with none of the team favoritism and all. Well said my friend, to an even harder sport.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
    Thank you, Wrestling teaches them so much. This last Saturday, Nik was on National Tv. He was amazing and knocked the guy out in the second round. His perseverance paid off. I am so proud of him.
Comment from Judy Couch
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Yes, it is amazing what they are able to do when we get out of the way and let them do it. I like the message of your poem.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
    thank you, NIk was on National Tv this last SAturday. He was amazing and beat Macbride with a TKO in the second round.
Comment from Selina Stambi
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We don't choose our children's destiny.

They find it

It is their Quest
not our ... I really like these lines. Nodding my head. :)

Great post. Good free verse. You are obviously a wonderfully supportive mom. What more could a child ask for?

Well done, jusylee. Nice to meet you.

Have a lovely week. Until next time,

Sonali :)

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016
    thank you so much. This last Saturday he won on national tv again. TKO in the second round. Wonderful fight. He is truly a wonderful man. His wife is having a baby girl around December 2nd, He is so excited.
Comment from heyjude
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Judy, wow. I think that would be scary. Maybe I've watched too many
movies where a fighter gets hurt. Of course, in all kinds of sports
there are injuries. As you said it is scary when our kids start driving
or move away from home. Is that a picture of your son?? If so, he
looks scary. Don't think I'd want to mess with him.  photo signature_11_zps8mrazsl4.gif

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
    Yep thats my baby. He is amazing. He is also very intelligent and has a great sense of humor.
Comment from Susan Chetcuti
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Well written. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on what it is like for you watching your son fight in the UFC. The last bit that you wrote about let them become who that want to be is spot on. well done.

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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
    thank you, NIk fought Saturday and got his twenty ninth victory with a second round tko
Comment from Kelly2
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Very nice commentary on our children growing up and doing what makes them happy. I can speak from experience, it's not always what we would have chosen for them. But didn't we always just want them to be happy?

I liked your list of emotions. Is this a poem or a prose?

Good writing and subject!

Kelly

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
    I have no idea if it is poem or prose. Let's just cal it Prosetry
Comment from DonandVicki
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Good for you to let your son find his own life, so many parents want to live their children's lives. Well written and exciting to read.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016
    Thank you Nik fought Saturday night and got his twenty ninth Victory with a second round TKO
Comment from Heather Knight
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This is so true. Whether we like it or not,we have to let our children choose what they want to do with their lives.
What exactly is UFC? Boxing?

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
    Yes, it is and he is so amazing. He was fantastic last night. He won by TKO in the second round. He is so gifted. Soon, he will be a father. They are having a baby girl sometime in early December. I am so thrilled for them.
Comment from Sasha
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This is marvelous, I do wish I still had a 6 to give you for it. You described perfectly the honest feelings of a loving parent. I remember how difficult it was to let go at times but you are so right we need to let them become who they want to be. Terrific work with this one.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2016
    I just got home. My youngest son , My husband and me just watched on National TV at a sportsbar my son fight .

    He won by TKO, in the second round.

    My biggest gift, is that despite the fact that he had to do interviews with the media. He called me for thirty seconds to say. I am glad you watched. My son loves me.