Animal Talk
NOT a children's story.44 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
His book got suffled to an editor that never read it and off it went to print.
We should ALL be so lucky. haha
Great story. Loved the repetitive telepathic thought.
Are humans that much different? Eat, poo, pee, have sex, sleep. Repeat. haha
Thank you for something humorous to read. You're always so good at it.
:) ellen xxx
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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His book got suffled to an editor that never read it and off it went to print.
We should ALL be so lucky. haha
Great story. Loved the repetitive telepathic thought.
Are humans that much different? Eat, poo, pee, have sex, sleep. Repeat. haha
Thank you for something humorous to read. You're always so good at it.
:) ellen xxx
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading, Ellen. :)
Comment from lancellot
A very good story, Phyllis. I would only suggest looking into this first part:
not because he was slow. Quite the contrary. They spent many happy summer hours running around the big yard, playing with balls and Frisbees.
The not because he was slow. It seemed odd, because I wasn't thinking that at all.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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A very good story, Phyllis. I would only suggest looking into this first part:
not because he was slow. Quite the contrary. They spent many happy summer hours running around the big yard, playing with balls and Frisbees.
The not because he was slow. It seemed odd, because I wasn't thinking that at all.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading and for the suggestions. :)
Comment from Hayley Solomon
I LOVED this!!! Your humour is immaculate. It SO did not go where I thought it would,and that is GOOD! This is really extremely professional, well edited, pretty outstanding not to mention actually funny. The publisher precise, then book review were spot on perfect, so authentic I had to laugh.
Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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I LOVED this!!! Your humour is immaculate. It SO did not go where I thought it would,and that is GOOD! This is really extremely professional, well edited, pretty outstanding not to mention actually funny. The publisher precise, then book review were spot on perfect, so authentic I had to laugh.
Well done.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Thank you so very much Hayley. I really appreciate the six stars and kind comments. Think I'll print this out and hang in on my fridge. :)
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Pleasure, Phyllis. this is surely worthy of more than a fridge? Hope it at least is a very fancy fridge with an ice maker? Laughing
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Yes, it is. Stainless steel with fresh water dispenser as well as a (noisy) ice maker. Your lovely review is going to look terrific up there between the grocery list and the doctor appointments. Thanks, again. :)
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:) Well at least it is a WORTHY fridge!!!
Comment from damommy
Poor Jack. I think he should have kept his book to himself. He was happy with the animals.
I do think we can communicate with animals via telepathy. Just haven't got it down yet.
This is a very cute story, and I enjoyed it very much.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Poor Jack. I think he should have kept his book to himself. He was happy with the animals.
I do think we can communicate with animals via telepathy. Just haven't got it down yet.
This is a very cute story, and I enjoyed it very much.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Thank you so much. :)
