Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

If copulation is good for your health. Why does masterbation make you go blind? At least that's what my mother told me. Today I need glasses. Guess I'm on my way.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016

Good question, Thomas! Your mom was right. It only affects the vision of kids that get caught. You must have learned to be discrete before it was too late. You're probably ok now. Thanks for sharing.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This free vere plain poem is well written. It is dull and boring (no pun intended)as it should be. There are no trimmings just plain talk, Not even a suggestion of sexiness here. Great job!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016

I'm not sure what you mean, Ryme4u, but I hope you like the plain stuff, too. :)
I figure there's no need to be explicit, because the reader's imagination can do a perfectly good job of fillling in the blanks with his or her own images of perfection.
I like to go for the yuks.

Thanks for the complimentary review, and good copulation to you! (I thought I'd throw in some rymes for you.)

reply by RYME4U on 11-Sep-2016

I was paying your poem a compliment. You followed the directions perfectly with no trimmings and the many ways you let the readers interpret your poem is just right.Great job.

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016

I'm aware that it was a compliment. I thought you'd know my reply was tongue-in-cheek. Thanks again!

Comment from HarryT

Exceptional

Brilliant! A wonderful, thoughtful and humorous presentation of a most stimulating sensation. The entire poem flows well, nothing is forced. Perfect style and structure.
I enjoyed thoroughly your ability to play with words.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016

Thank you so much for your flattering comments, Harry, and of course, for those precious 6 stars!! I can't tell you how much I appreciate it!

reply by HarryT on 11-Sep-2016

You are welcome.

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

I enjoyed your notes, especially your copulation sequence, nearly as much as I did your free verse.
I know you must have had just as much fun composing this odious ode as I did reading it.

Great read.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thank you for embarrassingly generous compliments, barkingdog!! (I hope you have as much fun DOING it!)

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

This quite a whimsical take on the topic of copulation you have penned. Your cautionary preamble sets the tone for what is to come and you did not disappoint. This poem is quite funny and the rhyming flows well. While the anticipation of it being overtly sexy leaves one wanting more.

Also your creative use of words such as concupiscence...flirtation...fascination...
participation...copulation...gyration...consummation...pollination...procreation make this a classic composition of exceptional creative expression on a sensitive subject often considered taboo.

All the best in the contest

Eugene

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016

That is a wonderful review, Bermy! I have fun writing most of my pieces, but this one even more so. I'm pleased and sorry that you finished wanting more. Actually, most of the poem is about sex, and therefore sexy. If I labeled the poem PG, nobody would have read it.

I grasp what you mean by "overtly." I don't write porn or explicit sex. Gross! (I don't even take any clothes off to "do it" I disapprove of interpersonal nudity and excessive touching) ;)

Thanks for your very appreciated comments, Bermy, and I hope our paths will cross again soon.

Cheers!

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

hahaha, that's right there where no rules written about it no education there of. copulating is just natural and part of life. One of my favorite pass times. this should do great, best of luck on this and have a wonderful day.

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016

Thanks for your comments, William. Glad to hear you like to pass your time copulating!
It really has caught on, hasn't it!