Her Name Was Isabella
The Magic Mirror Trilogy11 total reviews
Comment from justafan
Well hello my old friend. It is indeed nice to see you writing again. I hope all is well in your corner of the world.
Thanks for sharing :)
Always,
Missy
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Well hello my old friend. It is indeed nice to see you writing again. I hope all is well in your corner of the world.
Thanks for sharing :)
Always,
Missy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Imagination sure is a wonderful thing.
Cleverly crafted and well paced.
I felt the moment grow and peak with such a grand magic finale.
Just as Alice drew me into hwr story so you have drawn me into yours.
:-) Shirley
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Imagination sure is a wonderful thing.
Cleverly crafted and well paced.
I felt the moment grow and peak with such a grand magic finale.
Just as Alice drew me into hwr story so you have drawn me into yours.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
Comment from Sasha
Sorry I took so long to get to this, I've been feeling a bit under the weather lately. I enjoyed this poem and found it fascinating and kept me intrigued from beginning to end. I look forward to parts 2 and 3. Keep up the great work.
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Sorry I took so long to get to this, I've been feeling a bit under the weather lately. I enjoyed this poem and found it fascinating and kept me intrigued from beginning to end. I look forward to parts 2 and 3. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
Comment from krys123
Good day to you sir, TK;
-Just something that should be noted:
Third verse third line: "...up my spine" Instead of "...up spine".
Third from last verse And second line: ""then took a drink" Instead of "then I took drink"
-I was about to give you a six-star but these abuse spags Had prevented me.
-I superbly like the start of your story within a poem and I'm looking forward to the next installment. This is very good and it's going somewhere and it's very interesting.
-Nice to see you writing again and take care and have a good one TK.
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Good day to you sir, TK;
-Just something that should be noted:
Third verse third line: "...up my spine" Instead of "...up spine".
Third from last verse And second line: ""then took a drink" Instead of "then I took drink"
-I was about to give you a six-star but these abuse spags Had prevented me.
-I superbly like the start of your story within a poem and I'm looking forward to the next installment. This is very good and it's going somewhere and it's very interesting.
-Nice to see you writing again and take care and have a good one TK.
Alex
Comment Written 10-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Thank you my friend How I left those out is a bewilderment Read it three times and just put the words in that weren't there Blame it on my age lol Thanks for catching my imaginary non existent words !!!!!
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You are so welcome, TK, and take care and have a good one where and when you can always find it.
Alex
Comment from misscookie
Good day to you.
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match. You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
I can't wait to read the next line.
Cookie
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Good day to you.
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match. You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
I can't wait to read the next line.
Cookie
Comment Written 10-Nov-2016
Comment from lyenochka
Great descriptive narrative poem. I like the suspense built up especially we don't know if we can trust this intriguing sorceress. Perfect build up for the next part of the trilogy; the scene is set!
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Great descriptive narrative poem. I like the suspense built up especially we don't know if we can trust this intriguing sorceress. Perfect build up for the next part of the trilogy; the scene is set!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
Comment from nomi338
Happy to see you survived your magic carpet ride. Results were not guaranteed once you'd made it inside. Don't know if anyone missed you after you left home. If they did they might've said, "Man leave those drugs alone." LOL. Sorry old pal, just decided to have a little fun at your expense, I hope you didn't mind. The fun of your poem made me want to join in.
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Happy to see you survived your magic carpet ride. Results were not guaranteed once you'd made it inside. Don't know if anyone missed you after you left home. If they did they might've said, "Man leave those drugs alone." LOL. Sorry old pal, just decided to have a little fun at your expense, I hope you didn't mind. The fun of your poem made me want to join in.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image.
-I like the idea of a trilogy.
-I like the poem, very much, tk.
-Good imagery, rhyme, and story.
-Good description of the sorceress:
"Hair as black a raven's back
Eyes of deepest emerald green"
-She is a crafty one--the cards weren't enough;
she entices him with the magic mirror that
can unlock the truth about the past and the future.
-Just drink from this chalice to get there!
-Of course he did, and now he is on the ride of his life!
-His journey will be interesting to follow.
-Thanks for sharing this poem and more to come.
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-Great image.
-I like the idea of a trilogy.
-I like the poem, very much, tk.
-Good imagery, rhyme, and story.
-Good description of the sorceress:
"Hair as black a raven's back
Eyes of deepest emerald green"
-She is a crafty one--the cards weren't enough;
she entices him with the magic mirror that
can unlock the truth about the past and the future.
-Just drink from this chalice to get there!
-Of course he did, and now he is on the ride of his life!
-His journey will be interesting to follow.
-Thanks for sharing this poem and more to come.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
Comment from judiverse
Good to see your poetry again. Great description of that sorceress so that it's easy to visualize her. Don't drink that! No! No! she probably charges too much for the mirror anyway. She had you hooked when she said the cards were inconclusive. Lots of atmosphere in this as you take us down the rabbit hole. Excellent rhyme. In last stanza, the spelling you want is knew, not new. judi
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Good to see your poetry again. Great description of that sorceress so that it's easy to visualize her. Don't drink that! No! No! she probably charges too much for the mirror anyway. She had you hooked when she said the cards were inconclusive. Lots of atmosphere in this as you take us down the rabbit hole. Excellent rhyme. In last stanza, the spelling you want is knew, not new. judi
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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I knew that lol Thanks Judi
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You're welcome. Men know it but they can't seem to go ahead and follow the sorceress anyway. judi
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written mysterious poem. A sorceress and a magic mirror sounds very mysterious and have to be handled with care. A ride on the magic mirror may lead to interesting adventures.
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A very well-written mysterious poem. A sorceress and a magic mirror sounds very mysterious and have to be handled with care. A ride on the magic mirror may lead to interesting adventures.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
