Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Nice way to express appreciation for a friendship based not on material things but on a deeper personal level. Flowed easily. Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Thank you for the read and the nice comment.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

If you are grieving, my sincere condolences.

As for your poem, I'm sorry, but all I read
are clichés. These are exactly the words
repeated over and over again at wakes and funerals.
Poetry is something else.
It seeks insight beyond platitudes.
Poetry digs deeper.

One man's opinion.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

I will certainly consider your comment. Thanks.