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Pope has an eye for art

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Comment from sage17611
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Haha, it makes you wonder exactly what he is thinking as he checks out her nipples. It almost looks as if he is in disbelief that she would wear such a sheer blouse. That look is worth a thousand words. Good humor in your 5-7-5 poem, good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
    Thank you for taking time to read my poem and your good wishes, which I'm more than sure I'll need. LOL! I may be running from a lynching committee. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from jlsavell
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author, not to be sacreligious or disrespectful, but a man is a man. A picture worth a thousand words unless of course doctored..hysterical.. jlsavell

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
    Thank you so much, JLSavell, for taking time to read my poem. I can't imagine any male who could have ever not at least looked, but who knows what he's thinking. He might just be in shock that she doesn't care who sees them. LOL! Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
reply by jlsavell on 04-Sep-2016
    this is true...
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Looks to be like the pope temporarily turned pentecostal. I think he wants to lay hands on you. So do I. Ouch my wife just hit on the head.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
    I found another picture showing the pope leaning over and kissing her breast, but didn't have the kahunas to post it, figuring the lynching committee was probably already on their way, anyway. Thanks for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. Yep, those breasts are the kind that you can put one in your mouth and one in your ear and call long distance. LOL! :-)
reply by Thomas Bowling on 04-Sep-2016
    I guess you could reach the pope.
Comment from Craigitar
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Funny! This just goes to show, that try as one might, nature will have her way no matter who you are. Or is this a case of "God and silicone are great?"

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
    LOL! Yeah! "God and silicone are definitely great." Thank you so much, Craigitar, for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
reply by Craigitar on 04-Sep-2016
    You are most welcome.
Comment from barkingdog
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What must he be thinking?
She's definitely flaunting her wares.
Too bad he was caught by the camera.

Fine 5/7/5 with perfect syllable count.
Nice 'p' consonance and alliteration.

Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
    I can't figure it out, but the P's just kept crossing through my mind. I'm waiting for the lynching committee to show up for me. Thank you so much, Ellen, for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from William Ross
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hahaha, he is a man and not dead yet, goes to show the power and strength of the female breasts. not event the pope is immune. Nicely done. best of luck on this , have a great day.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
    Thank you so much, William Ross, for taking time to read my poem. There was another picture I found that had him leaned over kissing her breast, but in all honesty, I didn't have the kahunas to post that one. I'm looking over my shoulder for the lynching committee already. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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No wonder so many Alter Boys are abused.

Now, no one believes the Pope would stoop to such a level, however, the same can not be said about far too many Priests.

Touch of humor thrown into this as well.

Should make for an interesting entry into this contest.

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 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
    I'm glad you think my submission is interesting. I just hope it doesn't get me strung up by my kahunas. LOL! Thanks so much for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)