I've lost some teeth
7-7-7 contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from EricBrady
Hilarious! That is definitely me in a few years. This is a great little 7-7-7 poem on aging. This going to be a great entry in the contest and should be one of the top candidates. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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Hilarious! That is definitely me in a few years. This is a great little 7-7-7 poem on aging. This going to be a great entry in the contest and should be one of the top candidates. Best of luck.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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LOL! Me too my friend. Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three line poem. It is a good thing when one cannot see oneself when you have no teeth and no hair. It might be a better option.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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A very well-written three line poem. It is a good thing when one cannot see oneself when you have no teeth and no hair. It might be a better option.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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Right! Thank you for the awesome review Sandra!
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Kooky Clown
I enjoyed this as it made me chuckle as I am getting near to this stage in my life and the picture tells it all really. A well chosen picture to accompany the poem all together aa fun piece.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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I enjoyed this as it made me chuckle as I am getting near to this stage in my life and the picture tells it all really. A well chosen picture to accompany the poem all together aa fun piece.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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Metoo Kooky! Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Thomas Bowling
How did you get my picture? You will be hearing from my attorney. I don't take this kind of thing lightly. By the way, the 5 means I like this.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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How did you get my picture? You will be hearing from my attorney. I don't take this kind of thing lightly. By the way, the 5 means I like this.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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LOL! Thank you Thomas for the awesome review.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest very well. Your words were well chosen and combined nicely to convey the message of your poem to the reader.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest very well. Your words were well chosen and combined nicely to convey the message of your poem to the reader.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from oliver818
Ha great little poem. I love the photo too. Perfect for what you're talking about! Good luck with the contest and have a great day!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Ha great little poem. I love the photo too. Perfect for what you're talking about! Good luck with the contest and have a great day!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you Oliver for the awesome review my friend!
God bless!
Comment from Alex Rosel
A joyful look at ageing. And, many a true word is said in jest - and the image just about sums it up :-)
I liked this entry a lot. Good luck in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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A joyful look at ageing. And, many a true word is said in jest - and the image just about sums it up :-)
I liked this entry a lot. Good luck in the voting booth.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you Alex for the awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Comment from alleewin
I like your poem very much. I like the way it rhymes. I like the rhythm. I like the picture, but most of all I love the line...'I can't see so I don't care.'
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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I like your poem very much. I like the way it rhymes. I like the rhythm. I like the picture, but most of all I love the line...'I can't see so I don't care.'
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you Alleewin for the awesome review.
God Bless!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Entry requires three lines in average words, a philosophical first-person statement about being old, seven syllables, alliteration and at least one rhyme, no animation, no soundtrack, and great philosophy.
Your entry has almost everything required. Your statement is not clear. I suggest you add that. Great humor. Good job my friend.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Entry requires three lines in average words, a philosophical first-person statement about being old, seven syllables, alliteration and at least one rhyme, no animation, no soundtrack, and great philosophy.
Your entry has almost everything required. Your statement is not clear. I suggest you add that. Great humor. Good job my friend.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you Gypsy for the awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Comment from Dean Kuch
He hasn't lost them. Why, he's holding them right there in his hand!
Poor chap.
They say that when we get older, our minds and memory are the first things to go.
It appears that in this gentleman's case, it's true.
Funny 7/7/7.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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He hasn't lost them. Why, he's holding them right there in his hand!
Poor chap.
They say that when we get older, our minds and memory are the first things to go.
It appears that in this gentleman's case, it's true.
Funny 7/7/7.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean :)
Comment Written 06-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you Dean for another awesome review my friend
God bless
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You're very welcome.
~Dean
