Hair
Humorous 5-7-526 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
This is a cute 5-7-5....I would LOVE to have long thick red curls!!! But not the frizz, ha ha....great entry for this contest, good luck, blessings...
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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This is a cute 5-7-5....I would LOVE to have long thick red curls!!! But not the frizz, ha ha....great entry for this contest, good luck, blessings...
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you
Comment from susan18
Don't we all hate "bad hair days"?
Your poem captures the feeling with a few short words.
Good choice of words--frizz, red, thick.
I can feel the struggle!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Don't we all hate "bad hair days"?
Your poem captures the feeling with a few short words.
Good choice of words--frizz, red, thick.
I can feel the struggle!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you
Comment from Caressa_08
Yes, it seems everyday of the week, I too, have a bad hair day. So,seemingly, I can relate with this fun haiku, & think there might be some, especially, women who can also with this. .nd very well done, it is...Also the last line words depict exactly what photo indicates, very nicely, along with the other two.
Best wishes for your entry...Caressa_08
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Yes, it seems everyday of the week, I too, have a bad hair day. So,seemingly, I can relate with this fun haiku, & think there might be some, especially, women who can also with this. .nd very well done, it is...Also the last line words depict exactly what photo indicates, very nicely, along with the other two.
Best wishes for your entry...Caressa_08
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from Gladys2013
From one frustrated curly head to another, I definitely relate to and appreciate this poem. Curls are great to look at and maybe if you're luck, to touch, but its all a lovely presentation that took hours of hard labor, sweat, and tears. Great read! Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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From one frustrated curly head to another, I definitely relate to and appreciate this poem. Curls are great to look at and maybe if you're luck, to touch, but its all a lovely presentation that took hours of hard labor, sweat, and tears. Great read! Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I've seen bed head before, but this is more like barn head. One day my step daughter asked me to comb the tangles out of her hair. She never asked me again. I don't know why. I tried to tell her it wasn't my fault.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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I've seen bed head before, but this is more like barn head. One day my step daughter asked me to comb the tangles out of her hair. She never asked me again. I don't know why. I tried to tell her it wasn't my fault.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Exceptional. Ha Ha! sounds like you are writing about your hair. I remember how curly, and yes frizzy, your hair was at times. Des is much improved today, hope he stays that way. Love, Auntie.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Exceptional. Ha Ha! sounds like you are writing about your hair. I remember how curly, and yes frizzy, your hair was at times. Des is much improved today, hope he stays that way. Love, Auntie.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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How ever did you know. Yes I was.
Glad Des is doing better
Love ya
Comment from mvbrooks
I think most of us can relate to the line "all like to see but not own." Straight-haired people envy the curly-haired until they consider the upkeep. Fun poem.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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I think most of us can relate to the line "all like to see but not own." Straight-haired people envy the curly-haired until they consider the upkeep. Fun poem.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
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Comment from Pantygynt
I knew a woman with hair like that she was forever having it thinned out by the hairdresser. Hairdresser's delight such women must be. Certainly keeps the coiffeurs in business.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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I knew a woman with hair like that she was forever having it thinned out by the hairdresser. Hairdresser's delight such women must be. Certainly keeps the coiffeurs in business.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
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Comment from The Death
The grass always looks greener on the other side! People might admire things that they won't ever like to posses. You've made excellent use of satire here. The picture adds more fun to the piece. I'm happy I have thin, straight hair hehe! Good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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The grass always looks greener on the other side! People might admire things that they won't ever like to posses. You've made excellent use of satire here. The picture adds more fun to the piece. I'm happy I have thin, straight hair hehe! Good luck!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Thank you, lol.
Comment from jlsavell
author, now is not this just the real truth. We are never ever happy with our hair.. a curse for sure.. and the things we go through to try and change it... love your sense of humor.. jlsavell
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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author, now is not this just the real truth. We are never ever happy with our hair.. a curse for sure.. and the things we go through to try and change it... love your sense of humor.. jlsavell
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
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Thank you
