Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

Very nice rhymes
Photo
color scheme xxxxxxx
Imagery
In fall musings
Leaves as dancers
Sweet....xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Nika,
Thank you for reading my poem and for the wonderful stars and kind remarks. I appreciate your comments.
Cynthia1

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

The imagery in this defines you both as a dancer and a lover of dance! "tossing bright rainbows through the air" is alive with a sense of graceful movement. Much enjoyed!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016

Thank you so much for the very nice review! I am glad that you liked the poem.
Cynthia1

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

simply lovely of you enjoying dancing for many years, and all the freedom and joy
it gave you, the artwork was stunning and it was a well penned poem. thank you for sharing it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016

Thank you so much! I am glad that the poem was meaningful to you.
Cynthia1

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Dancing is a fantastic way to escape the stresses and cares of everyday life. That being said, the words of your poem are expressive and create strong images. Thanks for sharing this fine piece.

Wishing you all the best...

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016

Bill,
Thank you for such a positive review. I do appreciate your thoughts.
Cynthia1

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

The verbs, dancing, swirling, tossing provide a lot of movement--just as a dance would have. The imagery of both dance and autumn are also well done. A lot to accomplish in such a short poem. Well done and best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016

Debbie,
Thank you. Your review is very specific and positive. Very helpful!
Cynthia1

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Your cinquain and the accompanying, striking artwork capture dance's sense of freedom. The "swirling...autumn leaves" image is quite vivid and is reinforced by the picture. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016

Thank you, Joan, for the nice review. Yes, Cleo85 is a fabulous artist! I find that I am drawn to her artwork constantly. Thank you again for reading the poem and being so positive.
Cynthia1

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

I love the imagery in your Cinquain.
Each line offers the reader an experience
of color and movement, much like
dancing.
Beautiful presentation.
Nancy

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016

Nancy,
Thank you! Such lovely comments- I do appreciate the thoughts.
Cynthia1

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

A nice cinquain poem. There is freedom in dancing with they rhythm of the music reaching to the inner soul. A poem very well done. I liked it.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016

I am glad that you liked the poem, and I do appreciate your positive comments! Thank you.
Cynthia1

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

I love watching dance and always wanted to but I'm horribly clumsy. I see two pictures in my mind when reading your poem. One is of a dancer dancing outdoors with long colorful ribbons. But I also can visualize it as a light swirling wind on an autumn day as it dances trough the dry fallen leaves.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2016

Thank you. I like your two interpretations!
cymthia1

Comment from crybry67

Excellent

I can feel it now, the cool Autumn breeze...Fall is my favorite season. I love the colors! And I always wished I could dance. The image and feeling your words presented are lovely!

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2016

Why, thank you so very much for the very positive review! I am glad that you liked the poem.
Cynthia1