Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Now this is what I call true love. Someone who understands how much more there is to life and a person than the simple physical attraction that overcomes us at the onset, but usually fades unless there is something more. Great job, and good luck in the contest. :-)

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thanks for reading and for your kind words.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Good story. I prefer a twist ending. Most publisher will tell you that a short story should have a twist at the end that the reader didn't see coming. I hate to tell you. I looked at your profile picture. That's an ugly baby.

That's a twist ending.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016

Nooo! She's adorable! But I have human ones too.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, M J

= Oh, this is a neat story. I really enjoyed reading it.
= I believe you've got a great entry for the contest.
= Love willed out, and a happy ending. Nice job. Good Luck!

<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

I'm glad you liked it, Jax. Take care.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a lovely romantic story that I enjoyed reading. I think it's realistic and clearly composed. A very nice love story that is a fine entry into the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, Marilyn.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A really lovely entry in this "romance writing contest" MJ, the plot is the type I really love, a happy ending always brings.joy to an old romantic like me, and an expectant mum is the icing on the cake. Beautifully plotted and a nice easy read that brings no strain to a limited intellect, an excellent entry in this contest. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Typo : it's not the first time you've ask(ed) me that.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016

Thanks, Roy. I've already corrected the typo.

reply by royowen on 03-Sep-2016

Well done,

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Nice little romantic story, with a sad yet happy ending. I think you portrayed the emotions really well, and I could really feel how difficult it must be to
Overcoming the psychological problems related to losing the use of yourLegs. Thanks for Posting!

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016

Thank you for reading, Oliver.

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

What a beautiful story with a happy ending love can manifest itself in many ways. True love is deep and unconditional and here's the proof. Well written

dip

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016

Thanks again for your kind words.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi M J, I really enjoyed reading your romance story, it held me from the beginning right to the end. The story line held my interest, I was wondering if it was biographical? One way or the other you have a talent for story telling.

good luck in the contest, Mary

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016

Hi again Mary,
I'm glad you liked this one. It's purely fictional, but I think it's funny that quite a few people have believed it to be real. I'm going to take that as a good sign. Wink.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this story! You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. It was a joy to read and review. is this story about you and your husband? Good luck in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016

Thanks for your review, Teri.
No, the story is pure fiction.
;)

reply by Teri7 on 03-Sep-2016

Well, it was a great story! I enjoyed reading it all the way through! hugs, Teri

Comment from MelB

Excellent

This is a beautiful story of two people meant to be together! I don't know if this is biographical or not,but either way I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016

It's just fiction, Mel.(not sure if that's your name) Glad you have enjoyed reading it.

reply by MelB on 03-Sep-2016

Good story! My real name is Melissa.

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016

Thanks. Mine is Maria Jose.