tanka suite (blue crocus peeks)
tanka contest entry26 total reviews
Comment from RoostyNester
Sounds like a beautiful spring day. I can just hear the birds chirping. I liked your tanka poem. It was refreshing in the chosen words used. I liked it.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Sounds like a beautiful spring day. I can just hear the birds chirping. I liked your tanka poem. It was refreshing in the chosen words used. I liked it.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you, my friend~~Debbie
Comment from patcelaw
Debbie, this is a beautifully worded suite for the tanka contest. May your weekend be blessed. I hope you are doing well. Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Debbie, this is a beautifully worded suite for the tanka contest. May your weekend be blessed. I hope you are doing well. Patricia
Comment Written 02-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you, my friend~~Debbie
Comment from Allison78
It's so beautiful to see a rebirth every year as the snow melts and the trees and grass and flowers come back to life! You've expressed that so well with your very lovely poem! Beautifully written, well done!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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It's so beautiful to see a rebirth every year as the snow melts and the trees and grass and flowers come back to life! You've expressed that so well with your very lovely poem! Beautifully written, well done!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you, my friend~~Debbie
Comment from Spitfire
Each one of these could stand alone. They are all perfect examples of tankas. Good use of personification in the first two stanza.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Each one of these could stand alone. They are all perfect examples of tankas. Good use of personification in the first two stanza.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you, my friend~~Debbie
Comment from Ricky1024
Seasonal Poems,
"I already reviewed one about Early Autumn and Winter Winds!
I like to,write about the many,colors of,leaves that Fall,and decorate our New Jersey Garden State Parkway!
Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Seasonal Poems,
"I already reviewed one about Early Autumn and Winter Winds!
I like to,write about the many,colors of,leaves that Fall,and decorate our New Jersey Garden State Parkway!
Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you, my friend~~Debbie
Comment from heyjude
Debbie, these are very nice. Yhey make me long for Spring and all its beauty. I like songbirds serenade. They seem to sing out more in Spring
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Debbie, these are very nice. Yhey make me long for Spring and all its beauty. I like songbirds serenade. They seem to sing out more in Spring
Comment Written 01-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2016
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Thank you, my friend~~Debbie
Comment from royowen
An impressive array of Haiku, glorifying the seasons, leaving the winter and entering into the renewing of life and regeneneration of nature revealing the nature of hope. Well done, Debbie, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016
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An impressive array of Haiku, glorifying the seasons, leaving the winter and entering into the renewing of life and regeneneration of nature revealing the nature of hope. Well done, Debbie, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016
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Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
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You too Debbie,
Comment from dragonpoet
These stanzas give strong images of the flowers that bloom to tell us Spring has sprung. You use some good personification. You include sound with the birds and the children playing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016
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These stanzas give strong images of the flowers that bloom to tell us Spring has sprung. You use some good personification. You include sound with the birds and the children playing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 01-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
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You are so very welcome, Debbie.
Joan
Comment from Jay Squires
Ah, yes, Debbie. So calming your poem, so refreshing, so hopeful. Your choice of flowers delightful, but I found the last tanka especially enjoyable since you play the children's innocence and joy off the floating butterfly.
Good luck on the contest. This should be a contender.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016
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Ah, yes, Debbie. So calming your poem, so refreshing, so hopeful. Your choice of flowers delightful, but I found the last tanka especially enjoyable since you play the children's innocence and joy off the floating butterfly.
Good luck on the contest. This should be a contender.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016
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Jay, I was wor much, my friend~Debbieso veryyou ried about you when I saw you hadn't posted anything this week. It's good to know you are okay. I seem to be in a tanka mood right now. I wrote 20 of them yesterday. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
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Thank you for your concern, Debbie. I will be posting a lot less for the next several months since I'm so doggone busy editing my novel and working on an effective and satisfying ending.
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Okay, I'll try not to worry, but hope you check in once in a while, my friend. I care about you~Debbie
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Great poem about the beauty every day holds if we will just open our eyes and see it. The doctors tell me I don't have much time left. I try to concentrate on beauty.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016
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Great poem about the beauty every day holds if we will just open our eyes and see it. The doctors tell me I don't have much time left. I try to concentrate on beauty.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016
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I am so sorry to hear that, my friend. Of course none of us are guaranteed tomorrow, so we should enjoy every today. Take care and thank you~Debbie
