Comment from RShipp

Excellent

I am going to stop here with my reading and try to check out the book itself.

Thanks for the great idea of this writing!! I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2020

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is another superb addition to this book. Wonderful presentation, as always. Great imagery of the mist enveloping her. keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Thanks so much, Smurph.
I am really glad to know that you are enjoying the story.
Much obliged!
~Dean :}

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

reminds me of an old sacrificial alter waiting for the right victim to arrive.
Bringing the mist and the cold of death into play

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

As I'm sure you know, Vampires in legends and myths can take on many forms, Barb. Wolves and fog, or mist, are just two of them.Bats are also popular.
Thanks so much again for reading.
I really appreciate it.
~Dean :}

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This horror haiku, Mist Envelops Her, along with the eerie graphic and background thunder, puts the cray-cray in creepy. Always a spine tingler.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2016

Thanks for reading and following along with the story, Bill.
Much obliged.
~Dean

Comment from GWHARGIS

Exceptional

Very evocative. I love the fact that you gave something like mist such volume. Splendid imagery and very Gothic in tone. I could sense the movement of the mist and feel it curl around her. Well done! Gretchen

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2016

Thank you for following along with the story, Gretchen. And thank you as well for you kind and generous support of this project.
I very much appreciate your time, review, and six stars. More than anything else, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed this.
Thanks so much again.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Another excellent addition to your book.
-I like the whole presentation.
-Excellent imagery and alliteration
that adds to the aura of the scene.
-I like the satori line with additional personification.
-Thanks for sharing and continued success with the project.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016

Thank you for following along with the story, Pam. I'm really glad you've enjoyed what you've read this far.
Much obliged for the thoughtful review.

reply by Pam (respa) on 02-Sep-2016

You are very welcome; I am enjoying them.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Your haiku dances in the candlelight
Occasional glimpses of images
through the clinging mist
with exact syllables
for your fine hora haiku venture
Nicely done

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2016

Thanks for checking it out, Robert.
I deeply appreciate your time as well as your comments.
Take care, and thanks again.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Dean, this is eerie and chillingly so. The atmosphere is filled with horror, which of course is the whole centre of the story. Wonderful haiku. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2016

Thank you very much for reading and following along, Ulla.
It is appreciated.

Comment from Grasshopper2

Excellent

Chilling. The photo with the image from the haiku gives a physical sense of not quite cold. but, an uncomfortable and unnatural chill in the mist. Well done.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2016

Thank you for reading, Michael, I am very glad that you enjoyed this haiku.
Have a wonderful labor Day Weekend.
~Dean

Comment from pharp

Excellent

Dean,

Awesome artwork, candles to-boot, love the haiku and the gruesome sound too!
Excellent job in the penning of this spooky haiku. Thanks for sharing and the very best to you and Gypsy Blue Rose. Blessings.................Portia

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016

love the haiku
and the gruesome sound too! ...Hah! You're a poet and don't even know it, Portia.
Thanks for following along, and for your well wishes too.
I do appreciate it.
~Dean :}