Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Lovely image.
-Good topic and poem.
-I like the use of one continuous thought.
-A very nice message, as well.
-Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016

Thanks for the excellent review, I appreciate it, Mary

reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Aug-2016

You are welcome.

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

Fantastic photo with color against black and white...
Great little poem with
a good message.
This is one of my favorite little ones....
Good work.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016

Thank you so much Mary

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Lovely, Mary, both image and words fit well together, but mostimportantly words that ring true.
Good luck in the competition.

RG

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016

Thanks RG much appreciated Mary

Comment from melyuki

Excellent

Hi Jackarrie thanks for sharing this delightful 2-4-2 poem resonating Peace.. Lovely thoughts came flowing through my mind while reading your words. They are few,but with deep meaning. I totally agree - love of life, and all that is good around us, brings us inner peace and contentment. If only the world could view life in this way , indeed we would have more peace. Maybe one day .....
thanks for sharing your verse.. and best of luck in the contest Jackarrie. happy smiles from mel xxx

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016

Thank you so much melyuki for an excellent review I really appreciate it. Mary

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Mary, no truer words are spoken...when love is true...nothing can stand in the way...and you feel a peaceful feeling inside you...so very nicely written and a beautiful picture...love Linda xxxoo

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016

Thanks Linda for your very welcome review and such positive comments. Mary

reply by l.raven on 21-Aug-2016

you are so very welcome...xxoo Linda

Comment from Caressa_08

Exceptional

Such beautiful artwork to enhance your poem. And do agree that without love there is no peace . And what the world needs now is true genuine love of each other's fellow man....Though some men, unfortunately, know not true love and too were brought up without that much-needed love, and hate does flourish in that state of mind.

Best wishes for your entry, as you have a great message with just a few words.

Caressa_08

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thank you so much Caressa for the exceptional review and your great comments, I really do appreciate it. Mary

Comment from Bollie

Excellent

What an incredible poem with a beautiful photo that makes this poem come alive. It's not easy to write something significant with a limited syllable count, but you did a GREAT JOB of that with this poem. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thanks Bollie for your review and great comments, Mary

reply by Bollie on 20-Aug-2016

Your very welcome, Mary. Have a wonderful night.

reply by Anonymous Member on 20-Aug-2016

Your very welcome, Mary. Have a wonderful night.

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Hi Mary;
-why really like your writing because it so conscientiously effective and so appropriate because one one is truly in love, besides being overtly or falling overheads and heals, can find peace within themselves and virtually extend this love and peace to others.
-I really like your concept and your theme is quite effectively shown in your picture and especially through your words.
-Good luck in the contest and have a good one and take care.
Alex

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thanks Alex I really appreciate your review and comments. Mary

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Your single word title and artwork are eye-catching. I enjoyed your wise recognition and agree that more love in the world should be our goal. Best wishes in the 2-4-2 contest. Big hugs and happy weekend- Joan

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thanks Joan I am pleased your like it, Mary

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. Yes, we should practice more love and less hate then the world will become a much better place to live in.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thanks for the excellent review and great comments, Mary