Purest Heart
Once I was a writer, now a block of salt2 total reviews
Comment from johngie
Walter,
I really liked your well-written poem. You did a great job with imagery and your choice of words made a strong impact. Thank you for sharing with us. Keep up the great work.
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Walter,
I really liked your well-written poem. You did a great job with imagery and your choice of words made a strong impact. Thank you for sharing with us. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2016
Comment from AnnieDawn
I reread your poem over several times to try to get what you were saying in it and finally understand it. I have a couple of suggestions for you though...
Love is cubical (With the way you have spelled "cubical" the meaning is a box as I looked it up in the dictionary. Is that what meaning you were giving to "love"?)
Ride into the wonder bless (It would make sense if the word "bless" was "bliss" instead.)
Otherwise it was good. Have a great weekend.
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I reread your poem over several times to try to get what you were saying in it and finally understand it. I have a couple of suggestions for you though...
Love is cubical (With the way you have spelled "cubical" the meaning is a box as I looked it up in the dictionary. Is that what meaning you were giving to "love"?)
Ride into the wonder bless (It would make sense if the word "bless" was "bliss" instead.)
Otherwise it was good. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2016
