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Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Our Souls"Story telling poems
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Comment from schatzling
A very deep and soul-Filled prose.
I had to read it three times....the first real fast just to be reading it, catching just a few meaningful lines; the second much slower, taking in each word, each thought and going beyond the words into what took form within myself as I read complete thoughts; and the third, one last time to take in the entire prose as one and letting it sink in deep within my soul. This is very deep; very personal to you, yet you put your feelings into words and shared it with us, the reader. It is an exceptional writing. It encompasses so much, much more than your words conveyed if you let it (which I did). Thank you so very much for sharing. I am glad you did. Out of all your writings I still want and am going to read, I am glad I read this today...I just went into your profile and selected this one not knowing anything about it...it was as if I was pointed in that particular direction. (NOTE: I try to follow my instincts, if that is what you call it, because when I do not, something happens that made me wish I did....clairvoyant individuals told me once if I would have had someone help me and mold it in nothing but positive ways when I was younger, I probably would have ESP full blown, but since it was supposedly a curse (yeah....those catholic nuns) I did not get the full nurturing and now it just appears every once in awhile....I saved my mother twice and I didn't go on a plane once that crashed....YES, these are probably stories that need to be written too. I am digressing....sorry) Anyway, I was supposed to read this particular writing of yours this day; this moment....AND now I know why. It answered some internal thoughts that have been weighing heavy on my mind the past few days. Therefore, I thank you for that as well.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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A very deep and soul-Filled prose.
I had to read it three times....the first real fast just to be reading it, catching just a few meaningful lines; the second much slower, taking in each word, each thought and going beyond the words into what took form within myself as I read complete thoughts; and the third, one last time to take in the entire prose as one and letting it sink in deep within my soul. This is very deep; very personal to you, yet you put your feelings into words and shared it with us, the reader. It is an exceptional writing. It encompasses so much, much more than your words conveyed if you let it (which I did). Thank you so very much for sharing. I am glad you did. Out of all your writings I still want and am going to read, I am glad I read this today...I just went into your profile and selected this one not knowing anything about it...it was as if I was pointed in that particular direction. (NOTE: I try to follow my instincts, if that is what you call it, because when I do not, something happens that made me wish I did....clairvoyant individuals told me once if I would have had someone help me and mold it in nothing but positive ways when I was younger, I probably would have ESP full blown, but since it was supposedly a curse (yeah....those catholic nuns) I did not get the full nurturing and now it just appears every once in awhile....I saved my mother twice and I didn't go on a plane once that crashed....YES, these are probably stories that need to be written too. I am digressing....sorry) Anyway, I was supposed to read this particular writing of yours this day; this moment....AND now I know why. It answered some internal thoughts that have been weighing heavy on my mind the past few days. Therefore, I thank you for that as well.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016
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I have a feeling you could still be a person who has the gift of sight. There is something about you that is so spiritual. It is a shame that people try to beat that out of us when we are young. Thank you for caring about me so much. I hope you let the clairvoyant part of you grow. I mean, think about it. I feel like I know you, yet I have never met you. Your drawings and pictures reach out to me even when I don't know they are yours. What does that say about us?
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Kindred spirits perhaps.
Two individuals that needed to become friends even at a distance no matter the time (2016).
Two women who once had a best friend (instead of soul mate...a soul friend....and they both lost their best friend recently and now they are drawn to each other.....not as a replacement of the best friend they have lost, but yet as an addition to what makes them what they are. I hope you understand. I am having difficulties saying exactly what I mean (sometimes English is just too tough (heehee).
Comment from winnona
beautiful artwork, I think you completed the challenge of this contest well. your words were well chosen coming with each other forming their own unique rhythm. Then combining again and sending the message to the reader.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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beautiful artwork, I think you completed the challenge of this contest well. your words were well chosen coming with each other forming their own unique rhythm. Then combining again and sending the message to the reader.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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Thank you, It is a beautiful part of us. Our soul
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Very good entry into the Soul Writer contest. Nice flow to the work, from line to line, verse to verse. Enjoyed this read very much. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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Very good entry into the Soul Writer contest. Nice flow to the work, from line to line, verse to verse. Enjoyed this read very much. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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Thank you , so much. Our souls are such a blessing
Comment from LoannaLois
This is truly a deep,understandable definition and response to the question. I love the way you warmed up to the subject ,including a personal reflection. Nice, indeed.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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This is truly a deep,understandable definition and response to the question. I love the way you warmed up to the subject ,including a personal reflection. Nice, indeed.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much. Our souls teach us so much,yet we have much to learn.
Comment from Bridge
A well written piece especially considering the limitations you had to work with. I could identify with a lot of things you've said. All the best for the contest
Regards
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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A well written piece especially considering the limitations you had to work with. I could identify with a lot of things you've said. All the best for the contest
Regards
Comment Written 15-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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thank you , I miss my friend
