Comment from RShipp

Excellent

The old mental 'brain-eating' by reading one's mind. Love it!

I really do wish I had stumbled on to this book while teaching- it would have been a great reward read- so far!

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020

Thank you very much for the review 😊

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I cannot but feel sorry for Mirela. She seems to be an unwilling pawn in this scary story. Great work with this one. I am off to read the next. Keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

She'll be alright, don't worry, Smurpherette :) Thank you for the bottom of my heart. You are amazing.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Of all the chapters I have read, this one is the most chilling.
Not only for the picture which I might add sends chills down the spine, but also the idea that the fiend will feed on her feelings and fears and confusion

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Yes, this one scared everyone. After all, It's horror haiku. LoL Thank you for taking the time to read all of them.

Comment from RoostyNester

Exceptional

Very nice poem about the witch and Mirela. Bringing more fear to her already dreaded adventure. Nicely done in a scary horror style of poem. I liked it. Very scary picture to reveal your story.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

Thank you very much, sweetie pie, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review. You are very kind. Thank you for the six stars!

gypsy

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Crikey! You sure can scare the pants of some, not me though. You and Dean are on par with horror poems. We need a female perspective, the genre suits you and Dean so well. Keep on keeping on!

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

G'day mate,

Thank you, sweetie pie, you are very kind and I appreciate your and feedback. Mwah!

Gypsy

Comment from Annette Gulliver

Excellent

Hi Gypsy.
Mirela is unaware that she will satisfy the fiend's hunger.
Good horror haiku choice of artwork.
:) Annette

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hola Gitana, como estas? I've just written a review and it all but disappeared. I love this great project of yours. A great hora haiku of the poor woman dragged into evil demons. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

Gracias, guapa, I'm so glad that you like it. :)
Your friend, gitana

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Eww...I think this one creeped me out the most of all of them. Dormant...feed on fears...food (for thought). Well, I guess that means your writing was effective.

teresa

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written hora-haiku. The witch find the weakness of fear and feeds on that. Makes the fear stronger and bravery to fight agsinst the fear less.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

Thank you, my friend, you are very kind :)

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Ohhhh....read Deans last one....this is continuing that scary saga...poor Mirela....that witch would have a buffet with me, ha ha....wonderful, blessings....

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

LOL Thank you, my friend, you are very kind :)