Comment from Grasshopper2

Excellent

You filled the less than ten words with nine. I like the visually inverted pyramid draining away your life... (: Your dry and wry humor match well with your photo. Personally, my goal is to live forever and so far I'm 100%. Good luck in the voting booth. I'll vote for your early and often...wait, that's in the presidential election...

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

Your right. The shorter your life expectancy, the less the bargain becomes. When you're ole, life expectancy really isn't all that great.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

Actually, statistics show that the longer you live, more years are added to your previous life expectancy. But, of course, a lifetime guarantee at 70 isn't as good a deal as it is for a thirty-year-old.

Thanks for giving it some thought, Judy!

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This is a good entry into the Under Ten competition. Few words but what you have written is very reflective and certainly makes for interesting conversation. I like it. Best of luck in the contest. ~DD

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016

Thanks again, DD! I seem to like these shortles. Less chance of screwing up, I guess.
Good luck in your competition(s), too!

Don

Comment from Hayley Solomon

Excellent

haha very funny indeed, and you filled the ten word or less brief perfectly.
No punctuation, but that is obviously by choice
and fair enough.
Love the wry humour and selected expressive picture.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016

Thank you for the wonderful compliments, Haley! I'm so glad you "got" the humor. That's usually kind of iffy on FS.

All the best,

Don