Crazed
political craziness26 total reviews
Comment from mfowler
Hillary is a criminal.
Obama did start ISIS.
We will build a wall across our neighbour's border and get them to pay for it.
How can you possibly called that crazed? And that's just the tip of the iceberg with your future president. And then there's all the rest of them.
If politicians weren't there for self-promotion or self interest, and gave a shit about the people and the country, the machinations of politics, the lifestyle and the evil influences that cut them off at the knees would ensure they would eventually succumb and their actions appear crazed. If not, they wouldn't last.
Your opening line 'Mind Warped' says it all. Power corrupts and ultimate power corrupts absolutely. Never truer words spoken or written, and that's why they all struggle to maintain any air of honesty, consistency and idealistic connection to values.
Yes, politicians are crazed in all sorts of ways. Like how you squeezed your five syllable line into one key word: Politicians.
Best of luck.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
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Hillary is a criminal.
Obama did start ISIS.
We will build a wall across our neighbour's border and get them to pay for it.
How can you possibly called that crazed? And that's just the tip of the iceberg with your future president. And then there's all the rest of them.
If politicians weren't there for self-promotion or self interest, and gave a shit about the people and the country, the machinations of politics, the lifestyle and the evil influences that cut them off at the knees would ensure they would eventually succumb and their actions appear crazed. If not, they wouldn't last.
Your opening line 'Mind Warped' says it all. Power corrupts and ultimate power corrupts absolutely. Never truer words spoken or written, and that's why they all struggle to maintain any air of honesty, consistency and idealistic connection to values.
Yes, politicians are crazed in all sorts of ways. Like how you squeezed your five syllable line into one key word: Politicians.
Best of luck.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
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MFowler, thank you for your insightful comments and review. They are greatly appreciated. Gramalot
Comment from kiwisteveh
I guess you have to be a little bit crazy to even think of standing for election, but you seem to have a particularly 'committed' bunch, this time around.
Not much to say about this brief poem, except that it meets the syllable count and is striking in its presentation. I suppose the all caps look was for emphasis...
Steve
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
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I guess you have to be a little bit crazy to even think of standing for election, but you seem to have a particularly 'committed' bunch, this time around.
Not much to say about this brief poem, except that it meets the syllable count and is striking in its presentation. I suppose the all caps look was for emphasis...
Steve
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016
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Yes, the caps were for just that. I want to scream sometimes about this years mess. LOL :) Thank you, Kiwisteveh, for your comments and review. They are greatly appreciated. Gramalot
Comment from thonnigford09
Nice 2-4-2. I agree!!! About the crazy part, but I get a little crazy in today's world too. Nice art work you've chosen. I really liked this. Thanks, thonnigford09
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Nice 2-4-2. I agree!!! About the crazy part, but I get a little crazy in today's world too. Nice art work you've chosen. I really liked this. Thanks, thonnigford09
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
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Thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated. Gramalot
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Thanks!:)
Comment from GE Parson
Yep, some of them, most of them, the majority of them
are.
I try not to listen to them or read what they say in fear of becoming like unto them.
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Yep, some of them, most of them, the majority of them
are.
I try not to listen to them or read what they say in fear of becoming like unto them.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
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GE Parson, thank you for your comments and review. They are greatly appreciated. Gramalot
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Jerri. How have you been, stranger? Good to see ypu posting again. I couldn'td agree with you more. I have never seen anything like this year as far as political races go. Never....ever. LOL...Bob
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Hi, Jerri. How have you been, stranger? Good to see ypu posting again. I couldn'td agree with you more. I have never seen anything like this year as far as political races go. Never....ever. LOL...Bob
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
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HI, thanks Bob..... I'm back off and on... Still dealing with family grief over granddaughter and sometimes it's hard to write. But, it feels good when I do... and yeah, for a good laugh... I watch the political craziness... LOL :) Jerri
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Absolutely nuts! :) Bob
Comment from William Ross
haha, you got that right, both these candidates belong in the loony bin. good 2.4.2 on the prompt, should do well on this, Good luck and have a good day.
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haha, you got that right, both these candidates belong in the loony bin. good 2.4.2 on the prompt, should do well on this, Good luck and have a good day.
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2016
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William. thanks for the agreeable comments and review. They are greatly appreciated. Gramalot
