Comment from RShipp

Excellent

Another great illustrative picture.

I am guessing her heavy conscience means that she is some mental baggage? I wonder if this is why she has begun this journey?

I am now just thinking aloud- like I would if I used this book in class.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020

Thank you very much for the review 😊 it's nice for you to say so.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I envision Hell as bad enough but your description of getting there is quite frightening. This is all pulling together nicely. I look forward to reading the next one.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016

Thank you for going back to read from the beginning, not too many do that. :) Thank you very much. Dean and I are deeply grateful for all our reviewers--YOU included. :)
gypsy hugs

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

the picture is so overpowering.
You can feel the pull as she is taken down to hell as she fights to escape the clutches .
Nicley done

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thank you :) Barb, I see you are catching up. Thank you for reading. Dean and I appreciate it very much.
gypsy

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

This haiku is one of the best and no six available. This touched my
soul and I am amazed at how I reacted to this piece. Well done. -Bill

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Thank you very much, Bill, I am grateful that you took the time to read and review my story. You are very kind. Be well.

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is so very exciting a project, my friend. I have liked all of these little stories told in 17 syllables or less including this one. Have a good night, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Thank you, my friend, you are very kind :)





Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work. I deeply appreciate it. Be well, my friend.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

What I wonder is if the artwork comes before the words or vice versa? whichever way they are totally in sinc - sink into Hades' - can almost smell the sulfuric soil in this one Gypsy, great job.
cheers

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2016

Thank you, my friend, you are very kind :)





Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work. I deeply appreciate it. Be well, my friend.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Gypsy, OMG sweet girl...this sorry gets creeper as it goes along....LOL...poor Mirela...very well written you...now I'll check on Dean...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2016

Thank you, Linda, :)

kisses,

gypsy

reply by l.raven on 11-Aug-2016

your welcome Gypsy...big hugs...xxoo Linda

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Interesting following this thread of poetry, my friend. I like your slant on the horror of terminating in hell. Your writing never ceases to amaze and entertain me, my friend. Bravo! Bob

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2016

Thank you, Bob :)

I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy

Comment from Bollie

Excellent

Really great poem and a GREAT picture accompanying it. This is a very profound, clever and creative poem. The description of Hades followed up with the state of mind is perfect. You were able to say so much with so few words. Really good job, keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2016

Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

Love the notes and letting the story evolve on its own...
I find the characters have their own voices...
Pretty frightening scene you portray...I remember a Hitchcock short like this..
Shine on...

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2016

Thank you, Nika, you're sweet.
Thank you, my friend, you are very kind :)