Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Excellent. What wonderful metaphors you use in this poem. The serenity and happiness come through well, It is beautifully presented, too. Great job.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2016

Thanks for the review, happiness seems to come and go, but the happiness I get from my mom's love, is always there, cheers, j

Comment from pharp

Excellent

Beautifully penned my friend. There is nothing more precious than a mother's love.
Excellent rhyming, meter and very smooth flow. A most enjoyable read and thanks for sharing. The very best to you in the contest. Blessings.............Portia

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2016

Thanks for the review. My mom's love for me is a happiness that is constant.Cheers, j

Comment from Cynthia1

Excellent

I liked this poem- it made me happy! I loved the personification of happy as in the following lines: "When I find happy, I hold on tight, wrap it around me in joyous delight"....How lovely! Nice rhyme and rhythm to the poem as well. LOVE the illustration.
Cynthia1

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016

Thanks for the inightful review. Happiness comes and go with me, but the thought of my mom always makes me happy. I wanted the flowers to be out of focus. Cheers, j

reply by Cynthia1 on 07-Aug-2016

Thank you.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

yes, very good these things make me happy as well. Nicely done on this, nice flow, good rhyming. Fits the prompt great. good luck and have a good day.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016

Thanks for the review William. Happiness comes and goes for me, the trick is to embrace and appreciate it when comes, cheers, j