Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

A good lesson for kids in this poem, Yvonne. It flows very well and is a pleasant read with a good tempo and cadence. I always like your Wally poems

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016

Thank you! Glad to see you again. 8-)

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Another fun Wally poem and good lesson (even for adults) to tidy up every day.

The last stanza though makes it sound like he'll do it each but then each week. Maybe make it clearer that tidying each day and then cleaning each Tuesday.

teresa

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

Okay. I'll take a look.

Thanks for your review. Always good to hear from you. 8-)

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

Please look and see it this is better. 8-)

reply by TAB_that's me on 05-Aug-2016

Yes, it is much more clear now:)

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

Thanks. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 08-Aug-2016

Thanks. 8-)

Comment from artisart4u

Exceptional

This is enjoyable to read, I know my grandchildren would love reading this.
They have chores to do and it reminded me of them.
It definitely is a good poem for children.
Congratulations on your win and good luck with this people, It would be good
in a book, if it isn't in one already.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind remarks.

Please let me know what your grandchildren think of Wally.

I appreciate your support. 8-)

Comment from Cynthia1

Excellent

Oh, I love this little poem! It would be delightful to hang in a child's room just to remind them gently of what needs to be done! Perfect illustration to go with the beautiful rhyme and rhythm of the poem. Nice.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

Thank you for this nice review. I appreciate it very much. I'm so glad you like it. 8-)

reply by Cynthia1 on 05-Aug-2016

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 8-)

reply by Anonymous Member on 07-Aug-2016

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 8-)

Comment from MelB

Excellent

So glad to see another Wally post! Nice that he cleaned his room, but he got a little beat up in the process. The poem rhymes and flows well.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2016

You know Wally, he's a little clumsy. LOL.

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your support. It means a lot. 8-)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is another cute story about Wally. I may need him to teach Greyson how to do that too! I do try but I think it would be better coming from Wally! Very cute story. hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Maybe he can hear the story and get the idea. That's why I write these stories, to give children the idea that they can do things if they try. 8-)

Thank you for a very nice review. I appreciate your support. 8-)

Comment from cumulus365

Excellent

This is a nice story poem to tell about a responsible Wally. Luckily he now made himself a promise to clean up once a week on Tuesdays.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Yes, he has. Thank you for a very nice review. 8-)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written children poem. It is hard for children to understand the importance of a neat and tidy room. This will learn them it is not hard to clean the room and keep it tidy.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review it. 8-)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi DaMommy,

I always like to read your poems about Wally and also see the pictures of him. He's a great writer, house cleaner, and poetry writer. Also he's very good looking.

Kat

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

I'll have to tell him you said that. LOL

Thank you for a wonderful review. 8-)

reply by MizKat on 04-Aug-2016

Good. I hope you'll tell him that liked his poem very much. Kat

Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Excellent

Yvonne, when I was married, I did a lot of house chores which made it easier when I got divorced. My days off, I would get my apartment cleaned on the first day to make it feel good. It also smelled fresh and clean! After eleven years of bachelor life, I'm still that way!!

Love the Wally artwork and this has a great message in your words. Well done my friend,,,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Good for you! I taught my sons to clean house, too. In fact, they iron better than anyone I know, including me. haha.

Thank you for a lovely review. Always good to hear from you. 8-)