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Comment from Challah1202
The stars are for the story and the meaning to your life. I posted this kind of story today, too, about two women who were friends. There is something about friendships that can't be explained, but leave you alone when they are gone. It breaks my heart. Write about it.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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The stars are for the story and the meaning to your life. I posted this kind of story today, too, about two women who were friends. There is something about friendships that can't be explained, but leave you alone when they are gone. It breaks my heart. Write about it.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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thank you, I will definitely go read yours. Thank you for understanding mine.
Comment from sage17611
Your friend is with you in spirit, you can still talk to her. Sometimes they will come to you in dreams, I know she knows how much you miss her. God blessed you with Krissie, most people have never experienced a true friend, someone that can be trusted on all levels. Your story is very well written with loving words for your friend, sorry for your loss.
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Your friend is with you in spirit, you can still talk to her. Sometimes they will come to you in dreams, I know she knows how much you miss her. God blessed you with Krissie, most people have never experienced a true friend, someone that can be trusted on all levels. Your story is very well written with loving words for your friend, sorry for your loss.
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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thank you , I miss her so much, There was never a moment when I was not myself around her. Thank you for your comforting words. They are so treasured.
Comment from islandergirl
I like this poem because it is brutally honest and raw, but yet, down to Earth. You had an incredible bond with your friend Krissie and she knew that you loved her. I'm sure she's shining down on you and is very proud of you. Keep writing and keep her memory alive.
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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I like this poem because it is brutally honest and raw, but yet, down to Earth. You had an incredible bond with your friend Krissie and she knew that you loved her. I'm sure she's shining down on you and is very proud of you. Keep writing and keep her memory alive.
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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thank you, I will treasure your words of comfort. That was how we were together. just us. I miss her, and I appreciate people like you who understand.
