Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Delightful rhyme and play on words....almost sounds like Dr. Seuss, or Lewis Carroll....love the sheer fun of it! Thank you for sharing, blessings....

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016

Thank you, IR, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from EricBrady

Excellent

Hilarious ending. Boy will that karma get you. Play the game for too long and someone is sure to find you out. I can see her now, flirting her way into the pockets of men with too much to spend. Love the story and love the rhyme.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you, Eric, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Hello Bill;
-Have you had too many cups of coffee when you wrote this? Anyway again I found it way out there and at the same time very humorous and funny. Chuckle!
-The rhyming is good and the concept of your theme looks like something one would write about after taking a hit of acid. I like you printing out Mahatma Gandhi
and slowly withering away like his body had.
-It would be very hard to find a picture for this theme.
-Thanks for sharing this by anyone and take care and have a good one.
Alex

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you, Alex, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Don't have a six, Dear Bill, but you've my undying praise for the light poem with a heavy undercurrent. You pulled out all the stops in this one by forming the content to the font. Have you ever tried to sell your stuff. You are indeed a humorist of the highest caliber.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you, Jay, for the stellar review. You always give me a shot in the arm. Bill

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

Rising to the top on the shoulders of others is usually a downward spiral in the end. I liked your poem. It was cute with a hint of humor.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you, RN, for the great review. Bill

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

LOL! I love it when you play with names... I just love silliness, I guess, and few have the talent to pull it off. Write one about a Phyllis. :)

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you, Phyllis, for the encouraging review. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

It is great to name drop until the day you find out that the last name you dropped has been dropped from the social parvenu, rendering you also of little or no value.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you, nomi, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

Too funny Bill!!! poor poor Nelly! hehehe wasting away like that! what a shame!! enjoyed reading your clever little poem!!! :-))

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you, Susan, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Bollie

Excellent

Funny and clever, a great read with creative rhymes. The syllable count is really good and allows the poem to roll off the tongue. This is a very good and entertaining poem. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you, Bollie, for the excellent review. Bill

reply by Bollie on 02-Aug-2016

You're very welcome, Bill. Have a great day.

reply by Anonymous Member on 02-Aug-2016

You're very welcome, Bill. Have a great day.

reply by Anonymous Member on 02-Aug-2016

You're very welcome, Bill. Have a great day.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Very nice, Bill. Your humour hits the spot with this well written humorous piece. Good lampooning, great flow and good rhyming.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you, GMG, for the excellent review. Bill