Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Sandra, a great job on this picture this challenge. This is different than others I've read . Isn't this what people do at times. They want to impress so they spend a lot trying to make themselves look important.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Thank you so much, Judy, for your lovely review. Life really is like that, but they always fall flat on their faces. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is an excellent poem, Sandra. Rhyming and flow are good throughout. The poem tells us a story of those who may try to be what they're not, living a lifestyle they cannot afford. To me, the moral is that it's best to live within our means and sleep at night without worry. Marilyn

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 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Thank you so much, Marilyn. Yes, that is the moral, but too many people don't learn it until it's too late. :) Sandra xxx

reply by BeasPeas on 01-Aug-2016

Well, some people have to keep hitting themselves in the head before they realize it hurts. Thankfully, most of us don't.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Good

I enjoyed reading your poem/story. I'm a huge fan of telling story in the form of a poem and yours is very good. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016

Thank you so much, Barbara, for your lovely review! xx Sandra