Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Yeah, ain't no doubts about it, writer's block will lay ya out colder than a Popsicle in the Arctic. Deader 'n' a door nail, pushin' up daisies, doin' the earth worm Watusi.
At least it feels that way during the time you're going through it.
'Least yer muse got ta' crackin' and come up with somethin' witty, and fun. It coulda' just left ya layin' there with nary a' nothin' on yer tombstone a'tall.
That's somethin' to be thankful fer, at least.

Best a' luck to youin's in the contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016

Thanks for the unique review.

reply by Dean Kuch on 31-Jul-2016

Welcome.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

The form is perfect in your little poem ( I don't know why but I'm into counting syllables now).
Besides it's very funny.
Good luck with the competition.

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016

Thanks for the kind review.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

For some in the throws of writer's block it surely feels like this. I like the wit and sarcasm also the alliteration in the final line.

Good luck in the contest.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016

Thanks for reviewing.

reply by dragonpoet on 31-Jul-2016

You're welcome.

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reply by dragonpoet on 31-Jul-2016

You're welcome.

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