Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. I really like the wording you used. The syllable count was right on too. Good luck. Teri

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016

Thank you for such good observations and comments.

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

Nice "crying out loud" poem. Very well done in a metaphor of the rain crying! I liked the poem and thought you did well with your verse. Very clever.

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 Comment Written 29-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016

Thank you for your good comments and support.

Comment from kathleenspalding

Excellent

Very good five seven five paints a great mental picture using very few words. Flows well. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 29-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016

Thank you for your very positive review.

reply by kathleenspalding on 29-Jul-2016

You're welcome.