Even the Weather Weeps
Weather can enhance our mood whether sunny or sad.23 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
What beautiful poem. Simple but moving words that compel you to want more. Each line seems to have it's own meaning then blended together at the end. Just a great job. Congrats on the win. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016
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What beautiful poem. Simple but moving words that compel you to want more. Each line seems to have it's own meaning then blended together at the end. Just a great job. Congrats on the win. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016
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Thank you for the excellent observations and thank you for the extra star.
Comment from Joy Graham
This is a fine 5-7-5 poem. I feel the down mood as we have had rain storms roll in every day for the past 3 weeks. It brings my mood down. I especially enjoyed your last line. It summed your message perfectly. Congratulations on winning this contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016
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This is a fine 5-7-5 poem. I feel the down mood as we have had rain storms roll in every day for the past 3 weeks. It brings my mood down. I especially enjoyed your last line. It summed your message perfectly. Congratulations on winning this contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016
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Thank you for understanding the poem and your complimentary review.
Comment from joannakruk
What a great expression of one's mood being in tune with the weather. Sometimes when we feel alone or overlooked, there is a peaceful sensation of having a synchronization with nature. This poem expresses this appreciation.
Well done
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016
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What a great expression of one's mood being in tune with the weather. Sometimes when we feel alone or overlooked, there is a peaceful sensation of having a synchronization with nature. This poem expresses this appreciation.
Well done
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016
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Thank you for being in tune with my poem.
Comment from Mae 222
Rain makes me happy to see the drops come down. Even if it someone
small crying, for I know they have a soul and their wants are the aggressive
tears where words cannot explain. Rain is the tears of that aggressiveness as
the world is trying to explain God's love for his people and His creative weather.
Your poem reminds me of all your words. God bless you.
Hugs, Mae 222
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Rain makes me happy to see the drops come down. Even if it someone
small crying, for I know they have a soul and their wants are the aggressive
tears where words cannot explain. Rain is the tears of that aggressiveness as
the world is trying to explain God's love for his people and His creative weather.
Your poem reminds me of all your words. God bless you.
Hugs, Mae 222
Comment Written 31-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Thank you for seeing so many layers of meaning in this poem.
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You are very welcome, Mary Kelly
God Bless you dear.
Hugs, Mae 222
Comment from heyjude
Mary, yes, I think the weather can certainly affect our mood. Rain
sure does tend to make us feel more depressed; at least if it lasts
very long. Good entry for the contest. Good luck
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Mary, yes, I think the weather can certainly affect our mood. Rain
sure does tend to make us feel more depressed; at least if it lasts
very long. Good entry for the contest. Good luck
Comment Written 31-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your good observations.
Comment from EricBrady
Although this is a sad moment, it is a beautiful piece. The pain that was felt, was felt by the individual and the weather. We came from the Earth and we will return to the Earth, so it only makes sense that we can feel each other's pain.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Although this is a sad moment, it is a beautiful piece. The pain that was felt, was felt by the individual and the weather. We came from the Earth and we will return to the Earth, so it only makes sense that we can feel each other's pain.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Thank you for such good observation.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This was a wonderfully creative approach to the contest and it certainly earned my vote. The content is quite powerful in its innocent simplicity. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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This was a wonderfully creative approach to the contest and it certainly earned my vote. The content is quite powerful in its innocent simplicity. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments. There is a back story but I don't need to share it. Thank you also for your vote.
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Sounds like there's a story behind those brief poetic words of yours. Each word is loaded. Thanks for sharing this well composed piece. Good luck in the contest.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Sounds like there's a story behind those brief poetic words of yours. Each word is loaded. Thanks for sharing this well composed piece. Good luck in the contest.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
Comment Written 31-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your good observation.
Comment from Bollie
This is a beautiful poem, very passionate and descriptive. I love the connection to mother nature, weather weeps with me. That's really really clever and creative. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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This is a beautiful poem, very passionate and descriptive. I love the connection to mother nature, weather weeps with me. That's really really clever and creative. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Thank you for such a sensitive review.
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You're very welcome, Mary. Have a glorious day.
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You're very welcome, Mary. Have a glorious day.
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You're very welcome, Mary. Have a glorious day.
Comment from Unspoken94
What is it when it rains and we look out that we begin
to tear up. This has happened to so many of us and I
appreciate your insight. Well done and you've got my
vote. Bill
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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What is it when it rains and we look out that we begin
to tear up. This has happened to so many of us and I
appreciate your insight. Well done and you've got my
vote. Bill
Comment Written 31-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your understanding and good observations.
