Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nature haiku, Indelible Impression, takes us back to days of discovery and wonder. The firsts of an emerging butterfly are certainly up there. Nice.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016

Thanks for your comments on my haiku, Bill. i'm glad you identify with it.
Don

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Writer captures this view well, ideal of change and seasons for its occurrence: the wonders of life. Smooth conveyance balancing new visions for butterfly as for the child watching in amazement.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016

Thank you, TPAC, for your thoughtful review.
Ogden

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Nicely done. It's fun to watch the reaction kids have when they see something that fascinates them. The image you chose to go with your short poem is perfect for your words. Marilyn

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016

Thanks again, Marilyn! I appreciate your comments!
Don

Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE

Excellent

Children and myself, transfixed it felt in time, as this form first emerged, and slowly pumped up majestic golden antennae and then wings of an Emperor Gum Moth. A miracle forever blessing my life, marriage, and motherhood! Thank you for sharing, and setting such beauty aglow anew. Maureen*&*

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016

Thank you so much for your complimentary and serendipitous comments!

reply by A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE on 29-Jul-2016

Great word, serendipitous. I hope you will have more to share. Maureen*&*

Comment from Mama Fish

Excellent

Good job on following the rules for this writing prompt. Simple and to the point. Butterflies are definitely a spring time miracle.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016

Thanks for your complimentary review, Mama!