Mankind's Lament
The end of the world10 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Brett, It's a shame you didn't enter this in FS contest write a story about this picture. It would have made a very good entry. Well, although things seems a bit bleak at the moment with regards to Isis and the US elections coming up, let's hope it doesn't quite come to this. But of course if Trump wins only God knows. All best. Ulla:)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Hi Brett, It's a shame you didn't enter this in FS contest write a story about this picture. It would have made a very good entry. Well, although things seems a bit bleak at the moment with regards to Isis and the US elections coming up, let's hope it doesn't quite come to this. But of course if Trump wins only God knows. All best. Ulla:)
Comment Written 01-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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I thought about doing so, but my muse was in such a bad mood when he wrote this one he asked me "Why bother?" So, I did not. Appreciate your comments and support though.
Comment from MizKat
This was interesting to read although as soon as I read it I forget what it is all about. So every time you write something it's like brand new to me. That's what happens when a person gets old and forgetful. LOL. Kat
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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This was interesting to read although as soon as I read it I forget what it is all about. So every time you write something it's like brand new to me. That's what happens when a person gets old and forgetful. LOL. Kat
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this little tirade. Your comments and support appreciated.
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I always like reading your work. Kat
Comment from misscookie
Ha-ha we made it another year,When will we realize only God know the day time or year,
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought write.... meaning after you read this you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Ha-ha we made it another year,When will we realize only God know the day time or year,
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought write.... meaning after you read this you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this misscookie.
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Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story from the last man on earth, after earth is destroyed one man get away from earth into space, he is also doomed to follow the rest of humankind his last days just prolonged.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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A very well-written story from the last man on earth, after earth is destroyed one man get away from earth into space, he is also doomed to follow the rest of humankind his last days just prolonged.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale.
Comment from Ricky1024
Decinimation of Earth by ISIS?
Those FUCKING HEADHUNTERS!.ALWAYS GOT THEIR FICKS IN EVERYTHING.
I,THINK THAT TO BE THE LAST PERSON (BUT ON THE MOON)YOU WOULD BE SWIMMING IN THE SEA OF TRANQUILITY WHILE EATING GREEN CHEESE BEFORE CROAKING?
RICKY1024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Decinimation of Earth by ISIS?
Those FUCKING HEADHUNTERS!.ALWAYS GOT THEIR FICKS IN EVERYTHING.
I,THINK THAT TO BE THE LAST PERSON (BUT ON THE MOON)YOU WOULD BE SWIMMING IN THE SEA OF TRANQUILITY WHILE EATING GREEN CHEESE BEFORE CROAKING?
RICKY1024
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale.
Comment from Sankey
haha I think this expression is an old Freemason's one "time immemorial " Yeah, ok, we won't ask where the inspiration or plain perspiration for this story came from. I like the saying here I sit all broken hearted etc.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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haha I think this expression is an old Freemason's one "time immemorial " Yeah, ok, we won't ask where the inspiration or plain perspiration for this story came from. I like the saying here I sit all broken hearted etc.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Liked that adage so I found a way to include it in a story.
Comment from barkingdog
Many of us think this, but hope it will never happen.
This is why each president that we elect is so important. We cannot let fear, hate and bigotry take over the world.
We have over come threats before. We can do it again. ISIS won't take down our world.
Well written, Brett.
:) e
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Many of us think this, but hope it will never happen.
This is why each president that we elect is so important. We cannot let fear, hate and bigotry take over the world.
We have over come threats before. We can do it again. ISIS won't take down our world.
Well written, Brett.
:) e
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from create4christ
I am so sad to realize that this could actually happen on our earth today! With ISIS and the depravity happening on the streets of our own USA...I could easily see this happening. One thing...Did you mean that the oxygen levels are almost DISSIPATED? Your work is always great!
Thank you for sharing. ..Penny
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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I am so sad to realize that this could actually happen on our earth today! With ISIS and the depravity happening on the streets of our own USA...I could easily see this happening. One thing...Did you mean that the oxygen levels are almost DISSIPATED? Your work is always great!
Thank you for sharing. ..Penny
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
There was a contest on here to write a story to the picture and this would have be a great contender. Excellently done and there seems to have been a lot on here speaking of doom and gloom, but that is what is coming.
My Mother when she was alive, said she wanted to sit in her chair and watch the end
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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There was a contest on here to write a story to the picture and this would have be a great contender. Excellently done and there seems to have been a lot on here speaking of doom and gloom, but that is what is coming.
My Mother when she was alive, said she wanted to sit in her chair and watch the end
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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I thought about entering that contest last night when I posted this piece but my muse said "Why bother."
As I said he has been in some sort of a bad mood lately.
So I decided to simply post the piece instead and save the Funny Money.
Glad you enjoyed reading it.
Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from jlsavell
Well Brett, where did it come from. However it made one sit up and do a doubletake. Eerily prophetic. This is an exceptional write. The irony, also, he was being depleted of the very things mankind destroyed in his own habitat.. incredible write.. jimi
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Well Brett, where did it come from. However it made one sit up and do a doubletake. Eerily prophetic. This is an exceptional write. The irony, also, he was being depleted of the very things mankind destroyed in his own habitat.. incredible write.. jimi
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale.
