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Pride won't hold you up...106 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
indeed, i wholeheartedly agree with you dear roy! pride is one of the deadliest sin there is becuase you end up hurting a lot of people seeking empathy.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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indeed, i wholeheartedly agree with you dear roy! pride is one of the deadliest sin there is becuase you end up hurting a lot of people seeking empathy.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thanks Dear Rebekah, for these insightful words and great review I appreciate it, blessings, Roy
Comment from GE Parson
My blessed BIC,
When I think you have written the best poetry you have ever written, then you come up with another one that supersedes
the one I thought was your very best.
This poem would be a good one to end to a Christian Publication.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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My blessed BIC,
When I think you have written the best poetry you have ever written, then you come up with another one that supersedes
the one I thought was your very best.
This poem would be a good one to end to a Christian Publication.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thanks Brother Jerry, for these very encouraging words and wise review, your opinion means much to me, dear brother in Christ, sharing a crown, blessings, Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
You make some excellent points Roy.
However, it seems strange to me that if the USA is so bad, why are people all over the world trying to get here?
The illegals are using our resources that they did not contribute to and disrespecting our flag, refusing to learn our language and some actually want to kill us.
We do have a difficult decision to make in November. I am amazed that the best that this great land can put on the ballot for president is a "crazy" person or a criminal. Does not sound good for our future.
As always you poem was impeccable in Meter and rhyme.
Your scripture references are right on and I pray our leaders and those around the world are paying attention.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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You make some excellent points Roy.
However, it seems strange to me that if the USA is so bad, why are people all over the world trying to get here?
The illegals are using our resources that they did not contribute to and disrespecting our flag, refusing to learn our language and some actually want to kill us.
We do have a difficult decision to make in November. I am amazed that the best that this great land can put on the ballot for president is a "crazy" person or a criminal. Does not sound good for our future.
As always you poem was impeccable in Meter and rhyme.
Your scripture references are right on and I pray our leaders and those around the world are paying attention.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Not just there Janet, here in Australia as well, and there are millions pouring into Europe, all over the west, even some Asian countries, I've been there (US) several times, this work was not meant as a criticism of the US, but the problems that were manifest in other great nations and empires before they eventually fell are there. It may not happen overnight, but if one ditches God, well... God is not mocked, it can turn around, however. Don't worry, similar problems in other countries too. Thanks for the great review, blessings, Roy
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Thank Roy,
We do live in difficult times. Not only our nation but hose around the world. Warfare is being wages in our churches as well. Our church right now is embroiled in a problem that could split our church. Our pastor just asked for a transfer because he was standing up against the controvery and it was hurting his misistry and his family. I know we have to stay the course but the powers of evil are everywhere.
Thanks for listening to my rant.
Blessings my friend.
Janet
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I've been in those situations, but PG Elaine and I have been in a church for many years were there is loving unity, it's fabulous, but I do know what you mean Janet, Pastors need love too, Roy
Comment from rockinm76233
It's always a little frightening when one realizes that with one swift and might hand God can wipe away the world and create another one if He desired. Pride is never good. Enjoyed your words.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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It's always a little frightening when one realizes that with one swift and might hand God can wipe away the world and create another one if He desired. Pride is never good. Enjoyed your words.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thanks for these insightful words and great review I appreciate it, blessings, Roy
Comment from patcelaw
I agree Roy. America was founded on Biblical principles and morals, yet today one would be hard pressed to believe that were the case when so much of America doesn't honor the God of our founding. It saddens me as an American to see how we are sliding to a great fall. Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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I agree Roy. America was founded on Biblical principles and morals, yet today one would be hard pressed to believe that were the case when so much of America doesn't honor the God of our founding. It saddens me as an American to see how we are sliding to a great fall. Patricia
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thanks Patricia, for these insightful words and great review I appreciate it, blessings, Roy
Comment from mvbrooks
Excellent poem. It's scary that so many are blinding following one current candidate who is basically running on hate rhetoric.
Your rhyme is "easy/unforced" and enhances the flow of this poem.
The image sets a tone--yet the words are so "on point" and well-chosen that the poem easily stands alone.
This is clearly one of the strongest poems on the first page today. The ideas are presented with balance, and not overstated. It's very appropriate that the examples may reflect current world affairs--but purposefully chooses historic events for make its point.
EDITING NOTE:
" but then there pride became too rich," -- in this case, "there refers to a place" and you need to replace it with "their" referring to a group of people.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Excellent poem. It's scary that so many are blinding following one current candidate who is basically running on hate rhetoric.
Your rhyme is "easy/unforced" and enhances the flow of this poem.
The image sets a tone--yet the words are so "on point" and well-chosen that the poem easily stands alone.
This is clearly one of the strongest poems on the first page today. The ideas are presented with balance, and not overstated. It's very appropriate that the examples may reflect current world affairs--but purposefully chooses historic events for make its point.
EDITING NOTE:
" but then there pride became too rich," -- in this case, "there refers to a place" and you need to replace it with "their" referring to a group of people.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thanks for the empathetic review and honest outlook, it's pretty scary, we need a strong but forthright US, thanks for the correction, it's a of bit silly oversight, blessings, Roy
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Roy,
Timely, and Worth remembering piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme! - Keeping in mind the Author Notes, and the electoral wind laced with 'Trump's foul smell' in the USA.
Wording is impressive.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Hello Roy,
Timely, and Worth remembering piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme! - Keeping in mind the Author Notes, and the electoral wind laced with 'Trump's foul smell' in the USA.
Wording is impressive.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thanks RP, for these empathetic words and review, and great six, I appreciate it, blessings, Roy
Comment from Pantygynt
We had an empire once. By the time it was officially an empire we had abolished slavery. But the whole thing had been built on slavery and the infamous triangular trade continued long after slavery's abolitition in the UK. Bristol to West Africa - trinkets, West Africa to the Americas - slaves, Americas to Bristol - Cotton.
Our come-uppance may have come a little late. But it has come.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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We had an empire once. By the time it was officially an empire we had abolished slavery. But the whole thing had been built on slavery and the infamous triangular trade continued long after slavery's abolitition in the UK. Bristol to West Africa - trinkets, West Africa to the Americas - slaves, Americas to Bristol - Cotton.
Our come-uppance may have come a little late. But it has come.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thanks Jim, for these empathetic words and review I appreciate it, blessings, Roy
Comment from aryr
This was very well done. It remembered the lessons that history has taught and that many have forgotten. It remembered God, who although many do remember they have diminished his significance. It reminded us that we need to be humble and respectful. Perhaps there is time to correct the path. Great writing, thank you.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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This was very well done. It remembered the lessons that history has taught and that many have forgotten. It remembered God, who although many do remember they have diminished his significance. It reminded us that we need to be humble and respectful. Perhaps there is time to correct the path. Great writing, thank you.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thanks for these insightful words and great review I appreciate it, blessings, Roy
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You are very welcome
Comment from Kingsland
I don't agree with the opening thoughts in this piece of writing. Yet still, as a poem it is very well-written and has good poetic tones about the way it reads. This is a five-star production all the way... John
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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I don't agree with the opening thoughts in this piece of writing. Yet still, as a poem it is very well-written and has good poetic tones about the way it reads. This is a five-star production all the way... John
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thanks John for these insightful words and probing review I appreciate it, blessings, Roy
