Hora haiku (Horror haiku)
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Horror Haiku (prickly thistles)"A co-authored book of dark haiku poetry
30 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
I was wondering if Count Dracula was going to be a part of this horror?
In an exploratory/ enrichment class I taught in Middle School- we spent 6-class sessions on Mr. Dracula.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
I was wondering if Count Dracula was going to be a part of this horror?
In an exploratory/ enrichment class I taught in Middle School- we spent 6-class sessions on Mr. Dracula.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Feel free to use for discussion.
Comment from Sasha
This is another excellent addition to this awesome book. I have always been fascinated with this story and although I am certainly not an authority, I find it fascinating, informative, and although scary, a delight to read. Great work with this one.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
This is another excellent addition to this awesome book. I have always been fascinated with this story and although I am certainly not an authority, I find it fascinating, informative, and although scary, a delight to read. Great work with this one.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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Thank you, sweetie pie, you are very kind and humble. :)
gypsy hugs
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I went back to get the feel again and try to read up to the newest as I lost my space.
I love the story line dwelling in the counts castle as you introduce the star.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
I went back to get the feel again and try to read up to the newest as I lost my space.
I love the story line dwelling in the counts castle as you introduce the star.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Thank you :)
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Good solid imagery in this continuing haiku horror story. Interesting formatting with the change in colour and we now have the heroine(?) named.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2016
Hi there,
Good solid imagery in this continuing haiku horror story. Interesting formatting with the change in colour and we now have the heroine(?) named.
All the best
G
Comment Written 11-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2016
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Yes, the heroine in our story is mirela. Now we just need a hero. LoL
Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Hola Gitana, Ese haiku me ha gustado mucho. Tambien me encanta la musica. Yeah, it's a famous Castle in Transylvania. So is Mirela held captive by Dracula I wonder. Loved this haiku. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
Hola Gitana, Ese haiku me ha gustado mucho. Tambien me encanta la musica. Yeah, it's a famous Castle in Transylvania. So is Mirela held captive by Dracula I wonder. Loved this haiku. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Gracias bonita, me algebra mucho Que he guste este haiku.
Abrazos de la gitana
Comment from RoostyNester
Nice Haiku poem. Everyone loves the horror stories, especially about Dracula from Transylvania Romania. Love the haunted castle for your poem base. Very nice.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
Nice Haiku poem. Everyone loves the horror stories, especially about Dracula from Transylvania Romania. Love the haunted castle for your poem base. Very nice.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Thank you, Roosty, you are very kind. I am happy that you like it.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi GBR,
Vlad the impaler. What a horrible man. I watched a documentary on him once, it turned my stomach. I like what you are doing with Dean. it sounds great.
Keep writing.
Brenda:))x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
Hi GBR,
Vlad the impaler. What a horrible man. I watched a documentary on him once, it turned my stomach. I like what you are doing with Dean. it sounds great.
Keep writing.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thank you, Brenda, you are very kind and it's always good to hear from you. :)
gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
An odd coincidence--I was just reading about Milk Thistle--not as "prickly" and often used for medicinal purposes. You captured the scene of the castle well, and I admired your parallel artwork selection and alliteration of "g's". Here's to continuing success with your joint project- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
An odd coincidence--I was just reading about Milk Thistle--not as "prickly" and often used for medicinal purposes. You captured the scene of the castle well, and I admired your parallel artwork selection and alliteration of "g's". Here's to continuing success with your joint project- Joan
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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Thank you very much, Joan :) :)
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy,
It looks like you and Dean are doing a good job in writing a book together which must be fun. I have to be truthful though and say that this isn't my favorite kind of reading. Still, I will as I like both of you!!
Kat
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
Hi Gypsy,
It looks like you and Dean are doing a good job in writing a book together which must be fun. I have to be truthful though and say that this isn't my favorite kind of reading. Still, I will as I like both of you!!
Kat
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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thank you
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You're very welcome, Gypsy. Kat
Comment from Pantygynt
A fine addition to the haiku horror collection. You would think that if the Japanese haikuist has been writing Death Haiku since the 17th century he would have finished by now. After all it is only 17 syllables like a syllable per century I suppose that draws out the horror.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
A fine addition to the haiku horror collection. You would think that if the Japanese haikuist has been writing Death Haiku since the 17th century he would have finished by now. After all it is only 17 syllables like a syllable per century I suppose that draws out the horror.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016
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You sarcastic devil! Sir Gynt. LoL
Thank you for the review and comic remarks, I appreciate it.
Gypsy
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Sorry couldn't resist that.
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It is quite alright, Sir Gynt.