Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Colorful Rainbow, uses its seventeen syllables and brightly colored graphic to promote the idea of God and the promise of safety from a powerful being.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016

Bill,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings....................Portia

Comment from Allison78

Excellent

I really love this poem you have written! There is something so very special about a rainbow and you have captured that in your poem! Correct syllable count, good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings............................Portia

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very colorful artwork and presentation,
including the font.
-Good format.
-Imagery is good with
"colorful rainbow"
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-Good observation in line two.
-Line three closes the poem well.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.......Blessings

reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Jul-2016

You are welcome.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work went well with this. Good luck. Teri

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings...............................