Comment from nomi338

Excellent

You my friend, are the product of a mind that is working overtime, stimulated by all sorts of legal and probably illegal substances designed to keep you going on the barest amount of sleep. You have concocted this bizarre tale out of the knowledge that if you give people enough language, explosions and side boob views, the public will buy it time and time again. Coming back for yet more and more. I'm in.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016

Thank you, nomi, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from lucky linda

Excellent

You have quite a sense of humor and a feel for the dramatic.
Just a couple of nits:
I can't believe you're still her. ( you're still here)
memory through an hypnotic suggestion ( through a hypnotic)
as an ex-Cia ( ex-CIA) Keep writing, I think this is great.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016

The stinking text changes, I swear it does, when I post it. I know it said 'here', and I know CIA was entirely capitalized. They are fixed now. Thank you. The AN on hypnotic is correct because of the linguistic sound of the N and H as they meet. I won't argue that though, since most people would say the same thing about using A. I appreciate your riding herd on this though.

Comment from giraffmang

Exceptional

Hi Bill,

A definite sixer here for the sheer audacity and entertainment value of this hilarious post. Soaps in the US have amazing storylines compared to ours. So mundane! I remember Dallas writing off season due a dream and an alien abduction in the Colbys!

Great stuff
G

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016

Thank you, GM, for the super review. Bill