Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem. When a partner is unfaithful, the other will certainly knows about it even when there is not evidence or proof they will just know.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

Very nice poem about love gone wrong! She was extremely bitter. Your poem was well written and established the message you intended to send! Good Luck!

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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from rockinm76233

Good

Four stars only because the cursive writing was hard to read. The words were beautiful and I think you captured the feeling of a lost love, but the difficult reading kept it from being a five. Good luck to you.


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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016

Thanks for reviwing.

reply by rockinm76233 on 25-Jul-2016

Your welcome