The Worm
Keep your eye on it, maybe.5 total reviews
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is very cute! Good rhyming throughout. Cute picture, as well. I enjoyed this entry into the "The Famous Unusual Zoo". Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs
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This is very cute! Good rhyming throughout. Cute picture, as well. I enjoyed this entry into the "The Famous Unusual Zoo". Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
Comment from RYME4U
You're right. What a boring life worms must lead. This is well done and the subtle humor comes through well. The rhymes are good.Great job!
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You're right. What a boring life worms must lead. This is well done and the subtle humor comes through well. The rhymes are good.Great job!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
Comment from Mama Fish
Nice work about one side of the worm. My only suggestion is to find out the interesting side of the worm. The worm is actually an incredible creation, an animal that can be cut in two and not die. It becomes two worms that live. A creation that is actually very nutritious and high in protein. Yes, fried worms are good.
Thanks for your poem that shows the boring side of the worm. Maybe I'll write a poem to show the other side. :)
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Nice work about one side of the worm. My only suggestion is to find out the interesting side of the worm. The worm is actually an incredible creation, an animal that can be cut in two and not die. It becomes two worms that live. A creation that is actually very nutritious and high in protein. Yes, fried worms are good.
Thanks for your poem that shows the boring side of the worm. Maybe I'll write a poem to show the other side. :)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
Comment from rockinm76233
Well yes, I'd say we were pretty bored to have to sit and watch an earthworm. Ha, enjoyed the poem and the lesson. Good luck to you in the contest. I would say you stand a good chance.
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Well yes, I'd say we were pretty bored to have to sit and watch an earthworm. Ha, enjoyed the poem and the lesson. Good luck to you in the contest. I would say you stand a good chance.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
Comment from William Ross
I like this a good short poem on the earthworm, seems like they have a lazy useless life, but very important in nature. great job on this and enjoy your day
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I like this a good short poem on the earthworm, seems like they have a lazy useless life, but very important in nature. great job on this and enjoy your day
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
