School
a poem21 total reviews
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Bill, this is a very good work. Nice rhythm, rhyme and flow to each verse. Content is something relatable to all of us. I have to ask...what is a nard? Is that slang for something or someone like a nerd? Have never heard that word and didn't find it in my dictionary. Anyway, great writing; enjoyed very much. God bless and hugs, Susanne
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
  |
Bill, this is a very good work. Nice rhythm, rhyme and flow to each verse. Content is something relatable to all of us. I have to ask...what is a nard? Is that slang for something or someone like a nerd? Have never heard that word and didn't find it in my dictionary. Anyway, great writing; enjoyed very much. God bless and hugs, Susanne
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
-
HI, Susanne. I put quotes on both nard and I-data-fy-ing for reasons I'll put in the notes. Nard is a variation of nerd that fits the rhyme scheme. I-data-fy-ing is a made up word that suggests that we are only the sum of our parts. Thanks for reviewing this. Bill
