Comment from cterp

Excellent

This is my first exposure to your Daredevil Girl(s) and I like the idea. You have a new fan. When I was young, I used to write superhero stories about myself and my friends in my head. Should have written them down!

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

It's never too late to do that, you know!
Thanks for stopping by to read! I can always use another set of eyes on the story.
Take care,
Rhonda

reply by cterp on 21-Jul-2016

Ah, but then I would be copying your idea!

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016

Hmmm, good point.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Talk about "saved by de puddy tat" is the relevant question Rhonda, I think it's marvellous that Sage arrived in time to rescue Tabby, "suck her soul" out so that time was bought to rescue the situation, so Akie takes off to grab another daredevil girl to replace her, but at least they've bought som time, well done, excellent episode Rhonda, what an imagination, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

Thank you, Roy! You can never go wrong with cats! At least Tabby thought to play along, right?
I so appreciate your review, my friend!
Have a great day,
Rhonda

reply by royowen on 21-Jul-2016

Great reading Rhonda

Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Excellent

The boys must have shaved and rubbed something on Sage to make appearance be that of a goddess cat. Good thinking in adding this to this excellent chapter. I am starting to think Akie is wavering about these reincarnation ceremonies. This is really very interesting how you are moving this story along.

Rhonda, this is a fun read and well done my friend,,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

Thank you, Jim, and you're spot on with Akie. Sometimes it takes something extreme to wake a man's soul as well as his body. Bast has him thinking...and that's a good thing.

Thanks so much for your review, my friend. Hope all is going well in your world!

Rhonda

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. I was wondering how you intended to save her, very clever. I love your Sage cat. Being a confirmed cat-lover, this is a great read for me. I didn't find any errors.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

Thank you so much! I love cats, too, and think they are a lot smarter than some people give them credit for!
Have a great evening,
Rhonda

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Rhonda,

Good solid chapter. Well, old Mike is a bit of a cock, isn't he?

strange dark figure sauntered into the room flicking an ebony tail / She began to walk, - okay, this may seem very pedantic but if the cat sauntered into the room, it was already moving and didn't appear to stop so wouldn't have started walking again.

I prepared to let loose a scream so loud they wouldn't need any special rites to wake their dead mummies. - he he he!

All the best
G

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

I struggled with that part, and I'm glad you looked at it and pointed out the flaw. I just knew there was something I didn't like about it.
Thanks!!!
Rhonda

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine chapter, Rhonda--so, you gave Markie a starring role in this story, sort of. You'd better watch out, it'll go to Markie's head, and he or she'll demand star treatment--err--wait a minute, that's already the case!

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

Yeah, Markie is a girl, once Marky. You know how that goes with little kids and cats you're not sure the gender on...
And she's already assumed star status quite on her own. haha.
Thanks for the review,
Rhonda

reply by Mike Stevens on 20-Jul-2016

I kinda figured!

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

A very good chapter. I wonder if there is actually more to that cat. Now, you have sown the seeds of her escape before a new victim can be found. well written.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

Thanks so much. Yeah, there is a lot more about the cat...
Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Rhonda

= Oh, jeesh! Close call.
= Akie almost acted human, sleeze bucket that he is.
= Mike on the other hand, is just all BAD ... B_A_D!
= Great chapter, my friend.

(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ~ Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

Thank you so much, Jax! It's amazing how a person can turn another to crime by deception. More will develop on that front. I appreciate your taking time to review.
Rhonda

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Great action and description. I felt I was right there tied up with them and watching everything for myself. That's a mark of good writing. I can't wait for more.

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 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

Thank you, Barbara! I take your opinion quite seriously as you are a gifted writer and a wonderful reviewer. Have a great day,
Rhonda

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Ahhhh -Sage to the rescue. That was a good way to buy some time to let the story develop. It was also interesting to see Akie's resolve start to falter. I continue to enjoy this story. Your writing flows smoothly and I see no errors

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 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

Thank you, Douglas. I appreciate the review and encouragement. I need to get a book sent off to you as I'm back in town.
Hope all is going well for you.
Take care,
Rhonda

PS. I want a message from the badger! I have a feeling he's being held somewhere against his will.

reply by Douglas Paul on 20-Jul-2016

LOL - the Badger is away at summer camp. Maybe we will get a letter from him soon

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016

That's so funny. I guess he deserves a vacation!