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Comment from sage17611
Your poem is hilarious, I guess it was hard to focus on CC because of her breasts. Maybe she got the reduction because she go tired of all of the attention, Lol. Your poem is well written and an enjoyable read, good job with this write.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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Your poem is hilarious, I guess it was hard to focus on CC because of her breasts. Maybe she got the reduction because she go tired of all of the attention, Lol. Your poem is well written and an enjoyable read, good job with this write.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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Thank you, sage, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Pantygynt
Is this swimming against the current or kicking against the pricks? Probably the latter given the content. A good laugh on a Wednesday afternoon after a hard day's reviewing. There is in Cardiff a region of the city known as Saint Mellons. It has always worried me as to what might be found there.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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Is this swimming against the current or kicking against the pricks? Probably the latter given the content. A good laugh on a Wednesday afternoon after a hard day's reviewing. There is in Cardiff a region of the city known as Saint Mellons. It has always worried me as to what might be found there.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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Thank you for giving this a look. Perhaps the town is Sainte Mellons?
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Lol.
Comment from djsaxon
Hilarious. The Prince of 5 7 5's ventures into this arena and smashes it outta the park. I laughed from go to whoa. Interesting AAAB construct that totally works. last line is classic DJ
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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Hilarious. The Prince of 5 7 5's ventures into this arena and smashes it outta the park. I laughed from go to whoa. Interesting AAAB construct that totally works. last line is classic DJ
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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I've done a dozen, or so, of these in the last year. I'm thinking of working with an illustrator and putting them up. Thank you for the excellent review. Bill
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Do it. I did not review the Fleas write or the accompanying piece. I'm not clever enough. DJ
Comment from RoostyNester
Nice poem! Big breasted women do sometimes have the advantage. Especially of being remembered. Nice poem of humor and sense of style. I liked it and felt it gave the reader the idea of what your poem was all about. haha Very nice.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Nice poem! Big breasted women do sometimes have the advantage. Especially of being remembered. Nice poem of humor and sense of style. I liked it and felt it gave the reader the idea of what your poem was all about. haha Very nice.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Thank you, RN, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from jusylee72
OH heavens I can't believe I am laughing at this but I am. It is very cleverly written and does not offend. I enjoyed it very much. Please enjoy your day . Thank you.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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OH heavens I can't believe I am laughing at this but I am. It is very cleverly written and does not offend. I enjoyed it very much. Please enjoy your day . Thank you.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Thank you, JL, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, there we have it, an overly buxom and brainy femalian throwing all the debaters off with her twin-head alligators.
Smart thinking on her part to get the reduction and reduce her IQ from Mensa level to just superior.
Fun post and totally unique as is your signature.
Gloria
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Ha, there we have it, an overly buxom and brainy femalian throwing all the debaters off with her twin-head alligators.
Smart thinking on her part to get the reduction and reduce her IQ from Mensa level to just superior.
Fun post and totally unique as is your signature.
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Thank you, Gloria, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from Jay Squires
Ah-ha! Ripped from the headlines. Young college student at SC has a breast reduction and loses 56 IQ points, 24 on the left and on the smarter side, 32. Good stuff as usual, Bill!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Ah-ha! Ripped from the headlines. Young college student at SC has a breast reduction and loses 56 IQ points, 24 on the left and on the smarter side, 32. Good stuff as usual, Bill!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Thank you, Jay, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from krys123
Hello Bill;
-you convincingly made up words to fit the other real words in a rhyming verse are very imaginative which shows a gifted inventiveness and in ingenious creativeness.
-but I have to say by using the words seem to be a little bit strained over the rest of your rhyming words when out force neighborhood which was helpful in creating a fluidity of your reading and writing.
-The imagery is really humorous and distinctly clear and definitively expressive and vividly descriptive throughout your writing.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and made a good Lord be always with you my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Hello Bill;
-you convincingly made up words to fit the other real words in a rhyming verse are very imaginative which shows a gifted inventiveness and in ingenious creativeness.
-but I have to say by using the words seem to be a little bit strained over the rest of your rhyming words when out force neighborhood which was helpful in creating a fluidity of your reading and writing.
-The imagery is really humorous and distinctly clear and definitively expressive and vividly descriptive throughout your writing.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and made a good Lord be always with you my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Thank you, Alex, for the encouraging review. Bill
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You are so welcome my friend.
Alex
Comment from nomi338
It is very hard to concentrate when your opponent chooses to demonstrate her assets right before your eyes. Your truths quickly become your lies and your poor befuddled brain all at once realizes, that bras come in all type and sizes. The argument is over and done, your worthy opponent may soon need a new one.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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It is very hard to concentrate when your opponent chooses to demonstrate her assets right before your eyes. Your truths quickly become your lies and your poor befuddled brain all at once realizes, that bras come in all type and sizes. The argument is over and done, your worthy opponent may soon need a new one.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Thank you, nomi, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from dmt1967
I liked this one and found it very funny. I liked the play on words and the cheekiness of it all. It was done very tastefully and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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I liked this one and found it very funny. I liked the play on words and the cheekiness of it all. It was done very tastefully and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Thank you, dmt, for the excellent review. Bill
